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cquzyr

As is known to us, we are educated that we are supposed to be a successful person by not only teachers but also parents in our childhood. But how we do to succeed? Hence, this question triggers the heated issue that one should be more like others than be different from others to succeed. From my perspective, those who hold the opinion fail to analyze the problem pro-roundly（是想说profoundly吗？）, which should be discussed case-by-case.To begin with, let us take doctors for example. Doctors are obliged to cure diseses（diseases） even save lives for people. And in terms of how to trait patients for illness, they have a regular way to cope with it. When a sufferer get a cancer such as a gastric cancer, surgeons will do a（an） operation to carve the stomach organ for him/her. They cannot deal with this problem by an alternative choose like taking medicines. Also, a physician will make a prescription when he/she has a patient who just get a gastritis. Under this circumstance operation is not a necessity. On the other hand, Lawyer is the same case with this. When a lawyeer（lawyer） defend for his/her defense, all he/she has to abide by is the legestigation, such as the constitution or the criminal law. What they say and behavior are a procedure, they cannot do this by their way. Thus, those persons should be act more like others if they want to be a distinguished doctor or lawyer.Next, when it comes to technology realms, it will be a different situation. As an old cliche that technology needs creativity. Actually it does. The Sumsung mobile phone company is a good example to illustrate this. It is evident that Sumsung mobile phones were not fancy by the market in the past while Nokia was the prevailed one, although they both use Sybian. But when Android was developed by Sumsung things has changed dramatically. People in increasing number are using Sumsung phones, leading Nokia be a flash in the pan. Drawing from the experience we can conclude that companies in technology domains need innovation. Also this can be applied to the entertainment circle. Lady Gaga, an American girl, is favored with wearing weird constume（costume） which is serevely（severely） different from others. And now, she has the biggest fans in the twitter even in the world. Therefore, those need to be different to suceed.In conclusion, considering all the conditions comprehensively, it is safe to say that success hinges on what the jobs we do.

cquzyr

cquzyr 发表于 2013-6-7 21:36
As is known to us, we are educated that we are supposed to be a successful person by not only teache ...

我只简单改了一下错误的单词，因为觉得有点跑题。题目问的是 agree or disagree ……不过文章的例证是很不错的。只是最好一边倒？

cquzyr

还有结尾段还是写多一点比较好吧？

yzwdan818

apple,帮我改作文哦~~~~~~~~~

applesoforever

cquzyr 发表于 2013-6-7 21:38
我只简单改了一下错误的单词，因为觉得有点跑题。题目问的是 agree or disagree ……不过文章的例证是很 ...

。。。。。。。。。。。。没啥  服你了 可以折中

applesoforever

yzwdan818 发表于 2013-6-7 21:52
apple,帮我改作文哦~~~~~~~~~

恩 在改了

cquzyr

applesoforever 发表于 2013-6-7 22:47
。。。。。。。。。。。。没啥  服你了 可以折中

啊不好意思，我刚刚开始准备……所以不太清楚。我再改一次好了。

applesoforever

cquzyr 发表于 2013-6-8 16:12
啊不好意思，我刚刚开始准备……所以不太清楚。我再改一次好了。

没事  算了吧

applesoforever

07.30 综合 tpo23

As the reading passage says that the reasons for decllining of number of the yellow cedars, the professor disagrees with them from three respective aspects.

First, the lecture indicates that cedars are more resistant than other trees, and they can secrete posional chemicals which can kill the beetles eating the cedars. This is intradicted to the reading that the insect parasites especially the cedar bark beetle contribute to the decreasion of cedars.

Second, cedar trees are both domicated the mainland and island through the passage, but the island which no bear exists is also experiencing the declinion of the cedars, illustrating the bears are having nothing to do with the situation of the cedars.

third, the passage illustrates that the climate changes the number of cedars. And it says the yellow cedar are more sensitive now and they cannot stand with the cold weather so they are dead in the night. Therefore, the trees live in a higher which has a cold condition are easier to die than the trees in lower positions which has a warm weather. However, the fact is trees in lower situation are die more than those in the higher place. Thus, the climate are not responsible for the phenomenon which was refered in the passage.

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applesoforever

07.31 TPO21 综合

In the reading part the genetically modified trees are more excellent than other speices of trees. But in the lecture the professor gives three reasons to contradict the point referring in the reading.

First, the passage says that the genetically modified trees are more resistant to serious conditions like pest than other kinds of trees, so they are able to survive. The professor in the lecture points out that the normal various trees  which are unmodified have the diverse genes, so there must be certain speices can prevent from being hurted if they meet different kinds of serious situations such as the new pest or the changing of climate. However, the genetic modification make gene of the trees very uniform, so they can only be resistant to the ones having the specific gene. If these trees are suffering a intrusion of a new pest owning the new gene, they will be not able to survive and die out finally.

Second, the lecture says that the cost of genetically modified trees are higher than those non-modified trees. On one hand, the price of the seeds of modified trees will be higher than the non-modifed ones. On the other hand, when finishing buying seeds, the farmers are still need to give money to the companies everytime they planted becase the law has regulated this. Therefore, from the cost aspect, the genetically modified trees are not better than the unmodified trees.

Third, the professor illustrates that the genetically modified trees are growing more aggressively than wild trees. Hence, they will be compete for resources like sunlight and water which are also needed by wild trees, making wild trees die out. Thus, this is exactly opposite to the point of reading part.