ISSUE 51 (应追求长期目标而不是眼下的） 第一次卡着时间完成，求拍哈！

yzy0704

（PS： 第一次卡着时间完成了一篇ISSUE，可能漏洞百出，敬请见谅，谢谢啦！）

Anybody would like to be successful in their lives. Especially when people are young, they are more energetic and are more likely to have their own dreams. So this can be a kind of power, which push these people to study hard to realize their dreams. Then there is one problem. Should humans make a long-striving target, or just a short-term target? Different people have different ideas. Some people think that we should make a long-striving target, for it could help you to be as competitive as you can for a long time. But others refused, arguing that making a long-striving target will make people neglect the daily works, only dreaming to become successful. These people hold the point that all people should make short-striving target, for this would make people live in nowadays. In my opinion, both of the two ideas have their possibly sense.

As for the former kind of people who argue that people should make long-striving targets, their arguments do have some sense, and a long-striving target could surly make people keep energetic. For example, there are many students studying in colleges complained that they have no power to push them to study, and as a result, these students only stay in their dormitories, playing computer games without studying any more. Why could the phenomenon happen? Because when they were young, they hoped to enter a nice university. However, this target could be realized within a few years, and after entering colleges, they still have a long way to go. So a short-term target makes a student lose energy to strive for a better life.

And when we analyze about the letter opinion which was held by those people who are willing to set short-striving targets in their lives, we could find that this idea is also meaningful. After people make long-striving targets, they surly have a target to realize. However, if the target is too far from them, they will lose confidence to fight, or just hold a opinion that they still have much time to get ready for it. If so, these people will never be successful, only living in the dreams day after day. Compared to it, if people set a kind of target which could be realize in a short term, they will always be focus on the works, willing to realize the targets as soon as possible.

From the arguments attended above, both of the two arguments have their sense. As far as I am concerned, each of us should set a long-striving target in our whole lives, and this will show you the way to your destination, just like a lump. But when we are working, we must focus our attention at the moment, not thinking about anything far from us, and this will help you to do well in your daily jobs, making you be successful at the end.  

普渡哥

Anybody would like to be successful in their lives.    一般肯定句里面的所有人用everybody或者all the people吧。我也不是很sure.

ppguo

这篇文章的立足点是对的，就是说短期目标和长期目标都不可缺，只有短期目标会让人生没有目标，只有长期目标会让人有挫败感。但是在说理和选择例子方面，还需要加强。

yzy0704

谢谢您们的点评~~小弟回去改~~