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桔梗天

For me, It is really difficult for me to make this decision. A house can solve the problem that my family now do not have a house of ourselves, we just rent house to live . However, a business can provide me with a opportunity to change my family's situation, so I think through my hardship, I can buy a house for family soon. With a business there will be more space to develop myself. So I think it is better to buy a business.

  A business can make me experience many things in society. I just gratitude form college. I am protecting by parents all the time, so I do not have enough social experience. And I know it is not easy for my parents to feed me. Now I am twenty-two years old , so it is time for me to do something to reduce my parents' living  pressure. So a business is more valuable than a house.

 A  house is just a place to live, maybe someone will think that if a can not probably to manage a business, I may lose money , so I should not take a risk, at least a house can increase in value. I think this point is just one-side. Compared with a house, a business have more space to increase in value.

 Last but least, I think I can buy a big house for my family soon, with the money I earn form my business, and my parents do not need to worry about daily expenses. And when the get older ,they just need to travel and worry about nothing.

  So in my perspective, a business can give me more than a house,which provide me more opportunities. Especially in the long run, a business is more profitable.