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mtryshy

7月30日

SC 122

CR 90

RC 11p

http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_Preparation/thread-739277-3-1.html#last

judyzhan

跟楼上比起来进度真心慢了哎~~~

http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_Preparation/thread-741429-1-1.html#last

果果733

7.30
http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_Preparation/thread-739213-3-1.html#last

261727223

加油~~~坚持就是胜利~

晨依Jacqueline

昨天晚上看完电视不愿开电脑了 今天和昨天的一起发吧
http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_Preparation/thread-718585-44-1.html
颓颓颓 明日戒电视并且要和在职党同步起床时间

DUKB24

http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_Preparation/thread-713027-98-1.html

DUKB24

带头搞起今日的SC讨论：

来自OG12的一道题
OG12 105
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A)Beatrix potter, in her book illustration, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B)In her book illustrations,carefully coordinating them with her narratives,Beatrix Potter
(c)In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives , Beatrix Potter
(D)Carefully coordinated with her narratives, beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E)Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and


说出思路想法答案，要求是对每个选项的！疑惑点也可以说出来

秋蚂蚁

A) 1、coordinating的修饰主语不清晰，但这个句子中语法上修饰了illustration，但是逻辑上应该是BP；2、them指代不清，逻辑上指代illustration，就应该用it；
B)coordinating 的修饰主语不清晰，同A；
C)which定语从句做插入语，修饰illustrations，清晰明了；
D)coordinated在逻辑上应该修饰illustrations，但是语法上修饰BP；
E)1、coordinated在逻辑上应该修饰illustrations，但是语法上修饰BP，同D；2、第一个and形成coordinated和capitalized的并列关系，改变句子的原意；

疑惑：
E选项两个and是不是会导致并列关系混乱？

yakev6

From modifier point of view:
XXX, YYY, ving --> ving modify YYY
XXX, ving, YYY --> ving modify XXX ( or maybe YYY, causing ambiguous, at least)
AB  misplcced modifier
D dangling modifier,

From meaning point of view:
E distort the intented meaning.

From rhetoric point of view:
Two opening modifier back to back is awkward.

clover928

731

完成80%就是胜利~~~