【zombie在路上】final battle ！

CCcarol

这是我送给你的~~~窝瓜~~~木哈哈哈哈哈~~~~我最爱的窝瓜！！！

kaitlynyl

僵尸先森加油~
话说，LS那个是倭瓜吗？我一直以为是个冬瓜。

clover928

这是我送给你的~~~窝瓜~~~木哈哈哈哈哈~~~~我最爱的窝瓜！！！-- by 会员 CCcarol (2012/5/8 12:29:57)

噢，我最爱的窝瓜！！！！！！！打僵尸的能手哇！！！！！！

zombiee

ena，加油，一起来弥补残缺，哈哈；
carol，谢谢你的瓜，木有玩过啊，所以各种无知者欢乐多；
羊羊，咱们和小盆友们一起加油，哈哈
clover，小生尚未婚娶，alan是大叔哈，我是最多小叔，你也可以叫叔叔，嘿嘿


大家这么欢乐下面请允许我来道SC哈，OG上面很简单滴~请看

zombiee

OG12，6我对正确选项木有问题，问题在于解释。我的问题是：C、D的解释说them的指代有问题，E的解释又说them指代没问题啊~我有点疑惑，到底them指代怎么到E这儿就木有问题了捏？
In late 1997, the chambers inside the pyramid of the
Pharaoh Menkaure at Giza were closed to visitors for
cleaning and repair due to moisture exhaled by
tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so
that salt from the stone was crystallizing and fungus
was growing on the walls.
(A) due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which
raised its humidity to such levels so that salt
from the stone was crystallizing
(B) due to moisture that tourists had exhaled,
thereby raising its humidity to such levels that
salt from the stone would crystallize
(C) because tourists were exhaling moisture, which
had raised the humidity within them to levels
such that salt from the stone would crystallize
(D) because of moisture that was exhaled by
tourists raising the humidity within them to levels
so high as to make the salt from the stone
crystallize
(E) because moisture exhaled by tourists had raised
the humidity within them to such levels that salt
from the stone was crystallizing
Agreement; Parallelism
Th e plural subject chambers requires plural
pronouns. Th e sentence explains a causal sequence:
visitors’ breath introduced moisture that caused
salt to crystallize, which caused the chambers to
be closed for cleaning and repair. Th e phrase due to
makes this causal sequence somewhat ambiguous,
seeming to suggest that the repairs were due to
humidity from visitors’ breath.
A Due to is an imprecise expression of the
causal connection between the tourists’
breath and the closing of the museum for
cleaning; the singular pronoun its does not
agree with the plural antecedent chambers.
B It is not at all clear what the reference is for
the pronoun its; fungus was growing should
be parallel to salt … was crystallizing (not
would crystallize) because it is another eff ect
of the humidity.
C Th e pronoun them seems to refer to tourists,
which is nonsensical; the entire construction
is awkward and wordy; would crystallize is
not parallel to was growing.
D Once again, them seems to refer to tourists;
the entire construction is awkward, wordy,
and ambiguous; crystallize is not parallel to
was growing.
E Correct. Th e causal sequence is clear, and
them clearly refers to chambers.
Th e correct answer is E.

zombiee

来嘛~~~

cathynine

OG12，6我对正确选项木有问题，问题在于解释。我的问题是：C、D的解释说them的指代有问题，E的解释又说them指代没问题啊~我有点疑惑，到底them指代怎么到E这儿就木有问题了捏？
In late 1997, the chambers inside the pyramid of the
Pharaoh Menkaure at Giza were closed to visitors for
cleaning and repair due to moisture exhaled by
tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so
that salt from the stone was crystallizing and fungus
was growing on the walls.
(A) due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which
raised its humidity to such levels so that salt
from the stone was crystallizing
(B) due to moisture that tourists had exhaled,
thereby raising its humidity to such levels that
salt from the stone would crystallize
(C) because tourists were exhaling moisture, which
had raised the humidity within them to levels
such that salt from the stone would crystallize
(D) because of moisture that was exhaled by
tourists raising the humidity within them to levels
so high as to make the salt from the stone
crystallize
(E) because moisture exhaled by tourists had raised
the humidity within them to such levels that salt
from the stone was crystallizing
Agreement; Parallelism
Th e plural subject chambers requires plural
pronouns. Th e sentence explains a causal sequence:
visitors’ breath introduced moisture that caused
salt to crystallize, which caused the chambers to
be closed for cleaning and repair. Th e phrase due to
makes this causal sequence somewhat ambiguous,
seeming to suggest that the repairs were due to
humidity from visitors’ breath.
A Due to is an imprecise expression of the
causal connection between the tourists’
breath and the closing of the museum for
cleaning; the singular pronoun its does not
agree with the plural antecedent chambers.
B It is not at all clear what the reference is for
the pronoun its; fungus was growing should
be parallel to salt … was crystallizing (not
would crystallize) because it is another eff ect
of the humidity.
C Th e pronoun them seems to refer to tourists,
which is nonsensical; the entire construction
is awkward and wordy; would crystallize is
not parallel to was growing.
D Once again, them seems to refer to tourists;
the entire construction is awkward, wordy,
and ambiguous; crystallize is not parallel to
was growing.
E Correct. Th e causal sequence is clear, and
them clearly refers to chambers.
Th e correct answer is E.

-- by 会员 zombiee (2012/5/8 20:20:02)

这道题我前几天还发了帖子呢~ 先森参考一下http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-712513-1-1.html


PS。加油 打到G~

CCcarol

来嘛~~~

-- by 会员 zombiee (2012/5/8 20:40:05)

这个字体怎么被你做到的...~ 完败~!

clover928

(C) because tourists were exhaling moisture, which
had raised the humidity within them to levels
such that salt from the stone would crystallize
这里的tourists是主语，them可以指代tourists ，
况且这个which定语从句是错误的吧。。。G中which不可以指代前面整个句子啊。。。应该改成分词短语来修饰比较好哇。。。
(D) because of moisture that was exhaled by
tourists raising the humidity within them to levels
so high as to make the salt from the stone
crystallize
划线处是修饰tourists的分词短语，所以them会指代到tourists
(E) because moisture exhaled by tourists had raised
the humidity within them to such levels that salt
from the stone was crystallizing
这里的tourists是插入语，去掉了也是一个完整的从句，所以我想them应该是指代chambers的。。

个人认为哇。。。

双色鹿

ena，加油，一起来弥补残缺，哈哈；
carol，谢谢你的瓜，木有玩过啊，所以各种无知者欢乐多；
羊羊，咱们和小盆友们一起加油，哈哈
clover，小生尚未婚娶，alan是大叔哈，我是最多小叔，你也可以叫叔叔，嘿嘿


大家这么欢乐下面请允许我来道SC哈，OG上面很简单滴~请看

-- by 会员 zombiee (2012/5/8 20:18:08)

僵尸先生！！！求字体！！！！