享受生活，享受GMAT-明天该说再见了吧，亲爱的吉迈特mm

yakev6

发现自己的全划线题做的还是不好
分析愿意往往是因为没有一下看到split点，开始慌，然后看着时间走，更慌，然后就开始一个一个选项找错误，然后思绪就乱了。最后时间也浪费了，题也没做对，怎么才能克服这个问题呢？如果一下看不到split时候怎么办的？
59. Certain pesticides can become ineffective if used repeatedly in the same place; one reason is suggested by the finding that there are much larger populations of pesticide-degrading microbes in soils with a relatively long history of pesticide use than in soils that are free of such chemicals.

(A)Certain pesticidescan become ineffective if used repeatedly in the same place; one reason is suggested by the finding that there are much larger populations of pesticide-degrading microbes in soils with a relatively long history of pesticide use than in soils that are free of such chemicals.
(B) If used repeatedly in the same place, one reason that certain pesticides can become ineffective is suggested by the finding that there are much larger populations of pesticide-degrading microbes in soils with a relatively long history of pesticide use than in soils that are free of such chemicals.
(C) If used repeatedly in the same place, one reason certain pesticides can become ineffective is suggested by the finding that much larger populations of pesticide-degrading microbes are found in soils with a relatively long history of pesticide use than those that are free of such chemicals.
(D)The finding that there are much larger populations of pesticide-degrading microbes in soils with a relatively long history of pesticide use than in soils that are free of such chemicals is suggestive of one reason, if used repeatedly in the same place, certain pesticides can become ineffective.
(E) The finding of much larger populations of pesticide-degrading microbes in soils with a relatively long history of pesticide use than in those that are free of such chemicals suggests one reason certain pesticides can become ineffective if used repeatedly in the same place.

静下心看看原来，红的状语从句省略，逻辑主语错了。
黄的夹心修饰。
其实我是可以作对的，问什么要慌呢？

再贴一道
104. Although the first pulsar, or rapidly spinning collapsed star, to be sighted was in the summer of 1967 by graduate student Jocelyn Bell. it had not been announced until February 1968.

(A) Although the first pulsar, or rapidly spinning collapsed star, to be sighted was in the summer of 1967 by graduate student Jocelyn Bell, it had not been announced until February 1968.
(B) Although not announced until February 1968, in the summer of 1967 graduate student Jocelyn Bell observed the first pulsar, or rapidly spinning collapsed star, to be sighted .
(C) Although observed by graduate student Jocelyn Bell in the summer of 1967, the discovery of the first sighted pulsar, or rapidly spinning collapsed star, had not been announced before February 1968.
(D) The first pulsar, or rapidly spinning collapsed star, to be sighted was observed in the summer of 1967 by graduate student Jocelyn Bell, but the discovery was not announced until February 1968.
(E) The first sighted pulsar, or rapidly spinning collapsed star, was not announced until February 1968,while it was observed in the summer of 1967 by graduate student Jocelyn Bell.
AC时态错，B状语从句省略错，E while在句中有歧义

while 可以表示同时，也可以表示对比，作为initial modifier时候多用作对比。
还有那道题来着... while at the same time，不redundant，while只能表示 对比了。

N+ to be done vs N done
N + to be done 表示受人为影响后的属性。eg: the work to be finished
N + done 表示事物固有的属性。eg: work finished

-- by 会员 yakev6 (2012/4/28 23:40:37)

属性的区别昂。。求求alan NN能不能把这个“属性区别”的理论再讲讲呀？？？？真心没看到过啊，一惊啊~

PS：就比我们大那么一点点。。。就叫蜀黍咯。。。

关键是求那个属性区别的理论啊啊啊啊~~~~~~~~~

-- by 会员 泾渭不凡 (2012/4/29 1:20:30)

饭饭真快，刚贴完。饭饭可以看ron的解释。
http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/although-the-first-pulsar-or-rapidly-spinning-collapsed-t3500.html

no, 'to be sighted' is better for at least two reasons.

(1) 'first NOUN to be VERBed' is generally the preferred form in discussing the results of human efforts/actions/interference/perception/etc., while 'first VERBed NOUN' is generally used to indicate inherent qualities of the noun.
for instance, the following sentence is preferred:
henry bishop was the first musician to be knighted by a british monarch. --> knighting is performed by humans
the following is NOT preferred:
henry bishop was the first knighted musician in britain. --> this makes it seem as though being 'knighted' is an inherent quality with which henry bishop was born, or that he acquired it naturally/accidentally in some other way

(2) the word 'sighted' means 'having the sense of sight', so this sentence also contains the amusing alternative interpretation of referring to a pulsar that can actually see.

搞G战士DB

alan睡得真晚啊……要注意身体啊~加油哈！

泾渭不凡

饭饭真快，刚贴完。饭饭可以看ron的解释。
http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/although-the-first-pulsar-or-rapidly-spinning-collapsed-t3500.html

-- by 会员 yakev6 (2012/4/29 1:33:08)

熄灯前一切快速昂~~~~~~~~~~赶紧mark上~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~mark上方便白天来看~~~~谢谢哇！！

yakev6

alan睡得真晚啊……要注意身体啊~加油哈！

-- by 会员 搞G战士DB (2012/4/29 1:34:49)

加油加油。。。明天休息，今天可以看晚点，这就去拜读你的大作哈。

泾渭不凡

[饭饭真快，刚贴完。饭饭可以看ron的解释。
http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/although-the-first-pulsar-or-rapidly-spinning-collapsed-t3500.html

no, 'to be sighted' is better for at least two reasons.

(1) 'first NOUN to be VERBed' is generally the preferred form in discussing the results of human efforts/actions/interference/perception/etc., while 'first VERBed NOUN' is generally used to indicate inherent qualities of the noun.
for instance, the following sentence is preferred:
henry bishop was the first musician to be knighted by a british monarch. --> knighting is performed by humans
the following is NOT preferred:
henry bishop was the first knighted musician in britain. --> this makes it seem as though being 'knighted' is an inherent quality with which henry bishop was born, or that he acquired it naturally/accidentally in some other way

(2) the word 'sighted' means 'having the sense of sight', so this sentence also contains the amusing alternative interpretation of referring to a pulsar that can actually see.

-- by 会员 yakev6 (2012/4/29 1:33:08)

alan重新重新编辑咯？？？？
饭饭继续mark上！！！！谢谢alan!!!

搞G战士DB

alan睡得真晚啊……要注意身体啊~加油哈！

-- by 会员 搞G战士DB (2012/4/29 1:34:49)

加油加油。。。明天休息，今天可以看晚点，这就去拜读你的大作哈。

-- by 会员 yakev6 (2012/4/29 1:35:32)

快写完了，不敢发啊，队长你知道的……明天发吧~洗洗睡了哈~alan晚安~

yakev6

。。。她微信候着呢。。。

liulu007

肿么我是群里最后一个知道alan开贴纸了的人么？？？？？？
55555。。。
加油哈~~~

phoebe0624

加油，今天放假啦！！

199249712

看到一堆人管你叫大叔突然好罪恶。。。。。