以下是引用loveguitar在2004-12-22 23:09:00的发言:前天做了gwd的第三套,结果很受打击啊,时间到了没做完还错了一大堆题目 有在做gwd的吗?想讨论一下。下面贴几道题目: gwd 3-q3 A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits. A. which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing B. which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing C. which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of D. including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing E. including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of D(答案),我选B, 我的分析是:可能是which不太好,歧义,limits to 有问题吗?
which修饰前面的population,而原文意思是前面的整个句子(这个study)包含了下面的内容.这样来看用which就有问题了,逻辑意思不对.而且B中limits to the size of sharks that can be caught不简洁,用size limits for shark catches更好.limits to的问题,我觉得这里用for是为说明这个limits是为了shark catches而建立的(establishing),所以用for比较好.(这个也不是很肯定,大家再讨论)
另外同意ldf30000的意见,这里establishing-----,cloing-------and requiring平行对称.
以下是引用loveguitar在2004-12-22 23:15:00的发言:还有第19题(第三套) Possible long-term consequences of the “greenhouse effect,” the gradual warming of the Earth’s climate, may include melting the polar ice caps and a rising sea level.
- may include melting the polar ice caps and a rising sea level
- may include the melting of polar ice caps and the rising sea level
- may include polar ice caps that are melting and sea levels that are rising
- include melting the polar ice caps and sea levels that are rising
- include melting of the polar ice caps and a rise in sea level
B->E B中的the rising sea level不好,影响是融化和升高,而不是融化和升高的海平面,不知道是不是这么回事?
我觉得是这个意思.melting和rise并列.如果是B,那么melting(动作性n)和sea level(实义n)我觉得不对称,意思也不对. 还有,既然前面有了possible,后面再有may是不是有意思重复之嫌呢?
PS:我也要马上开始做GWD了,听说很难,而且我的pace很成问题,唉~~~已经做好受打击的准备了 |