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自己英语水平不怎么样 求大牛帮忙改改。。
你觉得现在的人比以前的人不开心或不满足么？过去的人是不是比现在得人活得开心？

In the fast-paced world, never is the issue concerning Happiness falling to attract our eyes. Happiness, as a final objective which every one want it internally, is greatly essential for keeping healthy, improving working efficiency, and other more respects. It’s the basis of the social harmony. Though life today is greatly diversified , there have been becoming a common situation that an increasing number of pubic think they don’t feel better than before. They are conscious of they don’t feel happy even though they live much longer than before. but for me, I don’t cast my vote on this idea cause I believe that happiness is something in your heart, it will chase your mind all the time. In the following paraphrases, I will cast my doubt on this idea by giving several points including the material life, the cultural life and the social equality.
Firstly, the equipments and devices of our daily life, like the computer which quietly advance the working efficiency, have been refreshing greatly, which could not be imagined in the past, as an important ingredient of happiness, the development of the material demands people’s necessity of life. For example, in my own experience, when I was a child, cause the poverty and the lack of resource, I could not have a beautiful childhood memory. But, now, I am not worried about how to struggle enough to get eat at all but to choose which food to eat. The satisfaction of meal make me feel happier than before, which resulted from the booming economy.
Secondly, It is universally acknowledged that life is consisted of two parts, one is the material life, another is the spiritual life or cultural life. Have you ever taken part in the diversified activities in your community? Have you ever traveled around some regions to cultivate your tastes and broaden your perspectives? Have you ever been committed to modern

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science to achieve some breakthroughs in some subjects? if you never had such experiences, you will never know how wonderful the current cultural life is which would satisfy your demand for the happiness of the spirit.
Last but not the least, because of the majority of people could not achieve their goals without the support of others, we could easily draw a conclusion that individual could not get individual happiness without the support of a group of people which means a society. Obviously, more equal society, more people will feel happy. In an idea community, there is no partial division, every one could have the equal power in dealing with the daily affairs. Though even in today we could not achieve that situation, we could compare the social equality which existence today with the past. In the ancient time, there is a serious hierarchy in an empire. People in different class had different quality of life. But now, we could see the gap between the rich and the poor have been gradually getting smaller. Peoples live in today have more power than before to protect themselves, to chase their dreams.
Admittedly, life in the past does have its own merits as more fresh air, more simple relationship. But as I mentioned above, life today have more valuable than before which could lead us to hug a happy feeling. Therefore I reinforce my standpoint that I definitely believe, living in today, I feel happier than before.