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[SC悬赏令] Season 2——manhattan 22(most people take it for granted now)

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11#
发表于 2011-10-9 15:59:55 | 只看该作者
22. Though most people take it forgranted now, the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based on academic merit is a relatively recent phenomenon, beginning only after World War II.
       A       Though most people take it for grantednow, the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based onacademic merit
       B       Though it is now taken for granted bymost people, the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on academic merit
       C       Now taken for granted by most people,colleges and universities admitting students based on their academic merit
       D      Most take them for granted now, but the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on their academic merit
       E       Most people now take for granted that colleges and universities admit students nationally based on academic merit, and it

A
B 改变了原来的逻辑意思,nationwide 用来修饰student
C colleges and universities admitting students based on their academic merit 也完全改变了逻辑意思. 而且非常的arkward.
D  主语变成了the admission of nationwide students
E 完全不知所云~
12#
发表于 2011-10-9 18:14:12 | 只看该作者
22. Though most people take it forgranted now, the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based on academic merit is a relatively recent phenomenon, beginning only after World War II.
       A       Though most people take it for grantednow, the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based onacademic merit
       B       Though it is now taken for granted bymost people, the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on academic merit
       C       Now taken for granted by most people,colleges and universities admitting students based on their academic merit
       D      Most take them for granted now, but the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on their academic merit
       E       Most people now take for granted that colleges and universities admit students nationally based on academic merit, and it
选B
仔细看了一遍,意思应该是:尽管大部分人都认为(按学术成绩来录取大学学生)是理所当然的,但其实(按学术成绩来录取大学学生)是一个最近的才兴起的事:从二战后才开始

2个考点,一个是take it/sb/sth for granted的用法,take的主语必须是人,另一个考点是nationwide的修饰位置
A,the natinonwide 不应该修饰admission,而该是学生
B,it指代后面that的从句,完美啊~
C,admitting students based on their academic merit变成修饰colleges and universities ,意思变成了colleges and universities  is a relatively recent phenomenon,逻辑不通
D,前半句没有主语
E,前半句没问题,后半句and it感觉好奇怪,明明是转折,为啥这里是并列呢?果断排除


前面看了大家的回复,觉得A和B比的确比较简洁,主动好于被动,但worldwide的位置,请毛毛在解释下。是全国性的录取工作还是全国的学生?我查了朗文说nationwide是happening or existing in every part of the country ,那修饰学生也可以罗?thx啦~






13#
发表于 2011-10-9 21:07:55 | 只看该作者
选A
22. Though most people take it forgranted now, the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based on academic merit is a relatively recent phenomenon, beginning only after World War II.
        A       Though most people take it for grantednow, the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based on academic merit nationwide修饰admission,全国性的录取
        B       Though it is now taken for granted bymost people, the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on academic merit nationwide修饰错误,且被动语态尽量避免
        C       Now taken for granted by most people,colleges and universities admitting students based on their academic merit awkward,不如the nationwide admission of 简洁清爽
        D      Most take them for granted now, but the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on their academic merit 缺主语,nationwide修饰错误
        E       Most people now take for granted that colleges and universities admit students nationally based on academic merit, and it 改变了句意,没有表现出转折关系,看完这个句子后毫无惊讶感
14#
发表于 2011-10-10 14:49:40 | 只看该作者
考点:修饰,代词,逻辑表达
选A
一看A知道这段话需要有个对比转折关系,虽然现在...,但是...是近来才有的现象,...仅仅从二战后才出现。
A 语意、逻辑关系清晰。
B 和A不同的是从句用了被动,还有nationwide变成了修饰students。被动没有主动好,而且nationwide按理应该修饰admission,意思是全国性的录取。
C 修饰有问题,take sth for granted,那么这里是colleges and universities被看成理所当然还是这个行为方式被看成理所当然,修饰不清。还有后面的their指代不清。还有,colleges and universities admitting students based on their academic merit,这里涉及动名词的用法,在manhattan里提到"A noun preceding a gerund must be in the possessive case if the noun is the doer of the action described by the gerund." 所以这里正确用法应该是 colleges' and universities' admitting students based on their academic merits.
如果不是改成这样,原句的意思就成了colleges and universities is a relatively recent phenomenon.
D them指代不清,因为their指代学生,那么them按理也是指代学生,但是逻辑意思冲突了。
E 没有了对比转折的逻辑关系。
15#
发表于 2011-10-10 23:16:05 | 只看该作者
22. Though most people take it for granted now, the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based on academic merit is a relatively recent phenomenon, beginning only after World War II.
       A       Though most people take it for granted now, the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based on academic merit
       B       Though it is now taken for granted by most people, the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on academic merit
       C       Now taken for granted by most people, colleges and universities admitting students based on their academic merit
       D      Most take them for granted now, but the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on their academic merit
       E       Most people now take for granted that colleges and universities admit students nationally based on academic merit, and it

原句前半句的Though对语义的转折有强调作用,故舍弃CDE
B选项第一句用的倒装,没A选项精炼,同时第二句中使用“the admission of nationwide students”,这意思莫非是说全国内的学生都需要基于学术成绩上大学,而国外的学生不需要靠学术成绩上大学?

故选A
16#
发表于 2011-10-11 15:19:13 | 只看该作者
明白了,偶專牛角尖了。谢谢毛毛
17#
 楼主| 发表于 2011-10-11 15:44:35 | 只看该作者
明白了,偶專牛角尖了。谢谢毛毛
-- by 会员 innerwarrior (2011/10/11 15:19:13)



O(∩_∩)O把思维改过来就行
18#
发表于 2011-12-6 22:15:14 | 只看该作者
22. Though most people take it for granted now, the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based on academic merit is a relatively recent phenomenon, beginning only after World War II.
       A       Though most people take it for granted now, the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based on academic merit
       B       Though it is now taken for granted by most people, the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on academic merit?nationwide 位置改变,改变句意;第一句被动语态木有主动语态好。
       C       Now taken for granted by most people, colleges and universities admitting students based on their academic merit—>去掉national改变句意。
       D      Most take them for granted now, but the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on their academic merit—>them无指代,but转折语气改变句意。
       E       Most people now take for granted that colleges and universities admit students nationally based on academic merit, and it—>nationally 修饰改变句意。It无法指代全句话。
19#
发表于 2011-12-20 14:07:09 | 只看该作者
22. Though most people take it for granted now, the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based on academic merit is a relatively recent phenomenon, beginning only after World War II.
       A       Though most people take it for granted now, the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based on academic merit        B       Though it is now taken for granted by most people, the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on academic merit  不简洁
       C       Now taken for granted by most people, colleges and universities admitting students based on their academic merit  主谓不一致 句意改变
       D     Most take them for granted now, but the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on their academic merit run-on句型
       E       Most people now take for granted that colleges and universities admit students nationally based on academic merit, and it       it没有指代对象



选A
20#
发表于 2011-12-27 16:35:44 | 只看该作者
22. Though most people take it for granted now, the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based on academic merit is a relatively recent phenomenon, beginning only after World War II.

       A       Though most people take it for granted now, the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based on academic merit
只有这个最像了。。。

       B       Though it is now taken for granted by most people, the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on academic merit
it is作用不明;to同上

       C       Now taken for granted by most people, colleges and universities admitting students based on their academic merit
失去了转折对比的感觉

       D      Most take them for granted now, but the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on their academic merit
their指代不明

       E       Most people now take for granted that colleges and universities admit students nationally based on academic merit, and it
同c
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