Probably reflect a bit deeper about why MBA. Right now my career direction has changed again, and wish could have 1 more year to explore all the opportunities again, and not just settled for consulting internship.
I actually agree more with #1 and #5: 你要写的如果能支持自己的career goal最好,不能的话,价值观上是一致的也可以。我觉得美国人很直接的,如果他需要你去支持CG, 就直接问了。建议你看他们网站上的dean的讲话。这篇文章的潜台词是: “你要什么,斯坦福都能帮你实现!我们唯一不能的做,是帮你想清楚你要什么!所以,麻烦你想一下,然后告诉我们。”
I truly believe in that, and I do think Stanford care about what matters most to you- they do listen and help you as much as they can, be it yourself, your family and any other things that matters to you.