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Topic:
Agree or disagree

It’s more important for the government to build art museums and music performance center than to build recreational devises (swimming pool, play ground)

It is necessary for the government to build the new devises because it would increase the number of jobs and stimulate the development of economy. What kinds of buildings are most important for people? Most people prefer to build the art museum and music performance center than recreational devises. I hold that these devises have the same importance for people. My reasons are as follows.

First, it is important for government building art museums and recreational devises because people can go to different devises in accordance with personal habits. Public constructions are built by government in order to help people relax. Therefore, there are no differences between building art museum and recreational devises because these buildings are both help people release their pressure, which comes from the work.

Besides, people can gain the benefits for building art museum and the devises of entertainment because they can get the opportunities from these plans of buildings public construction. People are required by building new devises, such as architects, civil engineers, or construction workers and so on. Therefore, government would offer many opportunities of jobs to its citizens. So, no matter what government wants to build any kinds of buildings, they are the most important and helpful for people.

Finally, government builds new buildings of art or entrainment can both stimulate the development of the economy and society because it would give a great attraction for tourists. Just like the art museum – National Palace Museum and the play ground – Taipei Arena, these places are very famous for foreigners. Last month, my foreign friends traveled in Taiwan, they asked me for required of taking them to visit Nation Palace Museum because they could understand the culture of China mostly and then took them to Taipei Arena because they felt very surprised that a great indoor skating rink is in there. So, building art museum and recreational devises can both give a great attraction to foreigners traveling in Taiwan and then stimulate the development of society and economy.

Above these reasons, building art museum, music center or recreational devises has the same importance for citizens because they can help students release their pressure and offer more opportunities of jobs. And the most important thing is that building these new devises can stimulate the development of society and economy.