求助！大家怎么写Purdue的这道essay呀？

richardmzq

Describe a major obstacle you have faced in yourprofessional, academic, or personal life. How did you overcome this obstacle?How did this experience foster your personal and professional development?

很难找出特别值得一写的困难。能想到的是当然大三冬天在欧洲周游列国结果在小农村迷路，用半生不熟的德语与几个捷克老人交流并在他们帮助下找到了车站，这个怎么就personal development了？

请教各位啦！！！求助求助！

richardmzq

自己顶起来

JonFrank

Hey there!  Happy to help here.  Im not crazy about the story you have suggested here—they wanna hear about something that changed your life.  J  And getting lost in a village, most likely, did not.  Now that being said, what you need to do here is pick the coooolest thing you’ve done.  Doesn’t matter what it is, but look at your Purdue app and see which cooool story you haven’t told yet.  Then, once you’ve decided which ACCOMPLISHMENT you need to use to write about, you can figure out what the “obstacle” was that you had to overcome.  But look at the question differently—you can use ANY accomplishment here you want to—just pick your best one, and back into this question.  That may get your brain firing in a new way!  Hope this helps…

Jon Frank

richardmzq

Hey there!  Happy to help here.  Im not crazy about the story you have suggested here—they wanna hear about something that changed your life.  J  And getting lost in a village, most likely, did not.  Now that being said, what you need to do here is pick the coooolest thing you’ve done.  Doesn’t matter what it is, but look at your Purdue app and see which cooool story you haven’t told yet.  Then, once you’ve decided which ACCOMPLISHMENT you need to use to write about, you can figure out what the “obstacle” was that you had to overcome.  But look at the question differently—you can use ANY accomplishment here you want to—just pick your best one, and back into this question.  That may get your brain firing in a new way!  Hope this helps…

Jon Frank

-- by 会员 JonFrank (2010/12/13 0:15:09)

thanks man. really appreciate it.