帮忙想一篇AA的攻击点~~~thanks~~

winow

明儿就考啦 谢谢各位赐教~~~

“The construction last year of a shopping mall in downtown Oak City was a mistake. Since the mall has opened, a number of local businesses have closed, and the downtown area suffers from an acute parking shortage, and arrests for crime and vagrancy have increased in the nearby Oak City Park. Elm City should pay attention to the example of the Oak City mall and deny the application to build a shopping mall in Elm City.”(新题)


1因果错误：construction of a shopping mall——其他影响
2横向类比：Elm City——Oak City
3  ————？

只想出两个………………

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还有一篇这月高频出现的~~！！
“Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seeking new business opportunities or a new location. Even in the recent recession, Helios’s unemployment rate was lower than the regional average. It is the industrial center of the region, and historically it has provided more than its share of the region’s manufacturing jobs. In addition, Helios is attempting to expand its economic base by attracting companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies.”
Discuss how well reasoned... etc.
1 常识性错误：unemployment rate lower ———不适合投资

2 范围变化innovative technologies——所有公司

3——？

fengshou

第一篇：
太注重负面影响了 也许有正面的影响呀 （举例）

第二篇：
人们只会manufacturing jobs 不会其它的呀

Luxe

第二篇
1，失业率低不意味着有好的商业机会
2，区域工业中心也不意味着有好的商业机会
3，历史上提供多制造业的就业机会，并不意味着在衰退时期也能提供。
4，提供制造业就业机会，只能对制造也有好处，对别的公司没好处。
5，helios目前只是想吸引科技型公司，而不是所有的公司，零售企业等可能很难找到好的机会。

qizuko

第一篇：
那个因果其实有很多环都可以攻击，local business close未必是mall的开立导致的，停车位减少和business close以及mall没必然联系，也没有证据说犯罪率和流浪者的增加跟前边的有因果关系，这些可以具体展开说两个；还有就是两个城市不可以类比

第二篇楼上说的很细，同意，补充一个，失业率低可能意味着没人可雇。

明天同考，加油～～

winow

谢谢各位！！！！！