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[作文]柒月贰拾玖日起坐稳狗狗汇总 --- 结贴至 扒月贰拾

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 楼主| 发表于 2010-8-3 11:09:07 | 只看该作者
给楼主一个小建议,在文件中增加“每日更新提示”,可以只写最新的更新情况。这样脱机工作也能清楚哪里更新了。谢谢!楼主辛苦了!
-- by 会员 rose86511 (2010/8/3 0:20:13)



谢谢建议,已经加上去了
72#
发表于 2010-8-3 11:12:45 | 只看该作者
望能附上答案思路或提纲~万分感谢
73#
发表于 2010-8-3 11:33:57 | 只看该作者
第22篇 AA是这个吗?我觉得应该是的

1.The following appeared in a memorandum from the head of a human resources department at a major automobile manufacturing company to the company's managers:
“Studies have found that employees of not-for-profit organizations and charities are often more highly motivated than employees of for-profit corporations to perform well at work when their performance is not being monitored or evaluated. Interviews with employees of not-for-profit organizations suggest that the reason for their greater motivation is the belief that their work helps to improve society. Because they believe in the importance of their work, they have personal reasons to perform well, even when no financial reward is present. Thus, if our corporation began donating a significant portion of its profits to humanitarian causes, our employees’ motivation and productivity would increase substantially and our overall profits would increase as well.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.
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发表于 2010-8-3 11:41:12 | 只看该作者
跟第7篇是同一篇吗?  狗主人你看看是不是啊。
75#
发表于 2010-8-3 14:33:41 | 只看该作者
来顶细心的LZ
76#
发表于 2010-8-3 15:56:54 | 只看该作者
太赞了!!! 谢谢所有的工作人员!!!
77#
发表于 2010-8-3 18:00:16 | 只看该作者
Employers should have no right to obtain information about their employees’ health or other aspects of their personal lives without the employees’ permission.

Location has traditionally been one of themost important determinants of a business’s success. The importance of locationis not likely to change, no matter how advanced the development of computercommunications and others kinds of technology becomes.”



求思路 谢谢
78#
发表于 2010-8-3 20:03:48 | 只看该作者
AI狗狗第20个不还是26题吗?跟狗狗里AI3是一样滴啊。。。重复了。。。看来这个题也高频了,出了3回了。

ps:像我这样作文不好的看作文狗狗的时候很仔细啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-8-3 20:20:46 | 只看该作者
AI狗狗第20个不还是26题吗?跟狗狗里AI3是一样滴啊。。。重复了。。。看来这个题也高频了,出了3回了。

ps:像我这样作文不好的看作文狗狗的时候很仔细啊
-- by 会员 bennywang2usa (2010/8/3 20:03:48)



谢谢提醒,我属虎了,一会更新重新上去
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-8-3 20:39:25 | 只看该作者
Employers should have no right to obtain information about their employees’ health or other aspects of their personal lives without the employees’ permission.

Location has traditionally been one of themost important determinants of a business’s success. The importance of locationis not likely to change, no matter how advanced the development of computercommunications and others kinds of technology becomes.”



求思路 谢谢
-- by 会员 mcair (2010/8/3 18:00:16)




建议AI从正反两个方面来论证,具体的列子可以参照AWA224来
比如第二题,先阐述location的好处,
然后再用however说明其他因素的重要比如cost,还有resouce等等
最后说明要综合多个方面的考虑,这个是中庸的说法,只是我的建议,当然也可以参考童鞋们的挑刺的方法,
可以到作文版多参照一些例文!
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