Employers should have no right to obtain information about their employees’ health or other aspects of their personal lives without the employees’ permission. Location has traditionally been one of themost important determinants of a business’s success. The importance of locationis not likely to change, no matter how advanced the development of computercommunications and others kinds of technology becomes.”
求思路 谢谢 -- by 会员 mcair (2010/8/3 18:00:16)
建议AI从正反两个方面来论证,具体的列子可以参照AWA224来 比如第二题,先阐述location的好处, 然后再用however说明其他因素的重要比如cost,还有resouce等等 最后说明要综合多个方面的考虑,这个是中庸的说法,只是我的建议,当然也可以参考童鞋们的挑刺的方法, 可以到作文版多参照一些例文! |