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发表于 2010-6-14 18:29:39 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
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题目是 当你收到一份secure job的时候,是否应该立刻抓住而不是等待satisfying job
In response to the problem, some people may argue that once you get a secure job, you should give up for it is not your satisfying job. But is it? Close analysis does not bear out the argument.

First of all, it is always top of the list of my viewpoints that heroes are those people who feel suitable at any environment. When you accept a secure job, it is a great chance for you to strength yourself, as you may not satisfy with it, since you have to learn how to balance your attitude and time, as well as how to deal with your dreams and facts. Actually I am now facing such a embarrassed situation, because I am major in the most disgusting course—Law. Gradually, I find that though I do not like studying law, the theories of law improve my opinion become more logical. So this is my experience to support my idea that staying in a secure rather than a satisfying environment is somehow a fortune to me.

In addition, an equally essential factor which deserves people's attention is if you stick to find a satisfying job at the cost of getting rid of secure job, you will spend extra money and time. There is no harm in keeping secure job until finding a suitable and satisfying job. During these periods of time, you gain knowledge and money without spending extra time.

Admittedly, it may be true that satisfying jobs are those you are interested or suited. However, this alone does not provide sufficient support to claim that you are not like secure job. Recently, a scientific research announce that once you find your potential ability in a job, it is easy for you to enjoy yourself with such a job. In other word, after you receive a secure job, you may gradually find it is your satisfying job.

All in all, although some people may still remain unconvinced, the reasons I have analyzed could at least make them more aware of the various dimensions of the issue under discussion. There is little doubt that more and more people will come to realize that keeping secure job until finding a suitable and satisfying job is a smart choose.
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-6-16 12:50:22 | 只看该作者
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