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185.You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy？ Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
    Facing the confusing choice to own a house or to run a business, people may have different bias. Some will buy houses for satisfing with the peaceful and comfortable life. However, other, like me ,will chose a bussiness to begin with a risky experience.Obviously, the great difference of the two choices is that the house is unlikely to be lost from your properities but a bussiness may be worthless for you fail to manage.
    First of all, business is a source of income so we can live on it. In the modern society, individuals make live on the their achievement of working. The most effective way is to run a business. I also have heard the complaint of the white-collar for the unfair slary from their boss.However, imaging that you are the employer and own the whole company, you would decide that how the profite will be divided to the employee.Needless to say, the money you get will equal even excess to your investment and meanwhile the income is continusouly. After serval years of striving, most of the owner of operations undoublely to accumulate money to buy a house. On the oppsite, chosing a house at the begining will not get a business.
    Secondly, having own business will be unforgettable experience of entire life. At the moment that we decide to purchase a business, we also chose a colorful life. The business connecte with boradly knownledge and the oweners face various unfamiliar conditions. It is a chance that challenge individual's skill to response the difficulties. During the process of the success, we may encounter to the frustrations and meet friends who kindly to help us to overcome the depression. Compare to the fortune and properties that we get, the achievement of self-reliance and the friendship from coopreator of the business is more valuable.
    Some may argue that the house is one of the human basical amenity which can not be ignored. Indeed, the dignity is the advanced necessity, which only be based on the independent life. A short period of miserable life is unable to destroy the willness of person, moreover is a opptunity to develop the hiden talent.Choising a house represents a conservative attitude toward the life which hardly leads a more successful career.
    In conclusion, I'd like to purchase a business at first.A business not only can provide income to support my life, but also is unforgettalbe experience to comunicate with various type of personality of businessmans. Actually, I　would grasp every chances apperaned to chanllenge myslef.

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