见过差的没见过语法那么差的 之二

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7. On Earth, among the surest indications of sunspot cycles are believed to be the rate that trees grow, as seen in the rings visible in the cross sections of their trunks.

1. On Earth, among the surest indications of sunspot cycles are believed to be the rate that trees grow
   
   
2. On Earth, among the surest indications of sunspot cycles are, it is believed, the rate of tree growth
   
   
3. On Earth, the rate at which trees grow is believed to be among the surest indications of sunspot cycles
   
   
4. Among the surest indications on Earth of sunspot cycles, believed to be the tree growth rate
   
   
5. Among the surest indications on Earth of sunspot cycles is believed to be the rate at which trees grow
   
   

正确选E，我选的为A，为什么，觉得E特别乱，而且on earth 放在句子中，觉得wordy,

能帮我解释下吗~~A究竟错在哪了~~~而E又好在哪~~

8. Imported into Massachusetts form Europe in 1869, the gypsy moth was used by a French scientist in an attempt at developing a strong strain of silk-producing insects, crossing gypsy moths with adult silkworms

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1. Imported into Massachusetts from Europe
   in 1869, the gypsy moth was used by a French scientist in an attempt at developing a strong strain of silk-producing insects, crossing gypsy moths with adult silkworms.

Imported into Massachusetts form Europe
in 1869, a French scientist was attempting to develop a strong strain of silk-producing insects by crossing gypsy moths with adult silkworms.

To cross gypsy moths with adult silkworms, in attempting the development of a strong strain of silk-producing insects, a French scientist in 1869 imported the gypsy moth into Massachusetts from Europe
.

The gypsy moth was imported into Massachusetts from Europe
in 1869 by a French scientist attempting to develop a strong strain of silk-producing insects by crossing gypsy moths with adult silkworms.

In an attempt at the development of a strong strain of silk-producing insects, a French scientist, importing the gypsy moth from Europe into Massachusetts
in 1869 in order to cross gypsy moths and adult silkworms.
这题我选的是A，虽然我觉得也很别扭，但是相比其他句子，我觉得他已经是effective,可是答案选D，当时我也倾向与选D，但是由于by a French scientist attempting，我认为他是错的，用OG就是wordy,所以，请大家看看，D没错吗~~？？

In Japan, a government advisory committee called for the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company , the largest telephone company in the world, so it would be

two local phone companies and one long-distance provider.

1. In Japan
   , a government advisory committee called for the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the largest telephone company in the world, so it would be

The breakup of the world’s largest telephone company, Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, was called for by a government advisory committee in Japan
, so it would be

A government advisory committee in Japan
called for the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the world’s largest telephone company, into

The breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the world’s largest telephone company, was called for by a government advisory committee in Japan
, so it would be

Called for by a government advisory committee, the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company in Japan
, the world’s largest telephone company, was to be into
这题~~呵呵~~经典提了~~~我遇了三次~~三次都做错~~~~原因就是~~我一次都没弄明白~~答案是C，我选了B。还是不知道为什么~~~能帮我解释下吗~~~真的很急人~~~

korver

....这最后一道题目的B选项写完了？后面直接into就完事了啊？

zxkingsey

In Japan
, a government advisory committee called for the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the largest telephone company in the world, so it would be

The breakup of the world’s largest telephone company, Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, was called for by a government advisory committee in Japan
, so it would be

A government advisory committee in Japan
called for the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the world’s largest telephone company, into

The breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the world’s largest telephone company, was called for by a government advisory committee in Japan
, so it would be

Called for by a government advisory committee, the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company in Japan
, the world’s largest telephone company, was to be into
B的句意都改变了，B是breakup called for，而原句的意思是A government advisory committee  called for