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发表于 2009-11-22 15:24:11 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
12.5考,现在感觉什么都不是很会,大家帮帮忙,看看有什么问题,这样大概能多少分啊?NN来看看

32. Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for sometime in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.



When face with the issue of whether to save your hard-earn money for the unknown-future- use or to enjoy the fascination of spending money, some people may think it is very difficult to discuss. As far as I am concerned, there are three fundamental factors to make me to deem the statement to save money for the future. I would like to show them as follows.



First of all, the most important reason for me to hold my position of saving money, is I can make sure that I would not be embarrassed, if someday I have to use the money in case of an unplanned emergency situation. Hypothetically, if was travelling around the world, and I lost my wallet without caution. Then, if I had some money in the bank, I would not be embarrassed and the money saved in the bank can make me secure. That is to say, there are a lot of unknown things in the future, I even cannot predict what will happen in the next second, so I had better save money for something and somewhere I have to use in an emergency in the future.



In addition, education is a very expensive affair and I have to pay lot of money for it. Especially for a student like me who wants to pursue a better education aboard which will cost a lot of money such as paying for tuition, board, apartment and so on. Even so, I do not want to increase the financial burden of my family, so I must not waste money for anything useless, just like name brands, entertainment, etc. Synonymously to say, I have to save money for the future to decrease my family’s financial burden.



Last but not the least, it may be true that sometimes we have to pay some money for amusement just because of the brief life. However, that does not mean that we can waste all of the hard earn money for enjoying. Assume someone without any money in the bank, then she/he cannot travel after their wedding to anywhere, she/he wants to visit anywhere, on the contrary, she/he may have to stay at home and waste the sweetest time without any memory because she/he has no money to do anything.



This is arbitrary to judge saving money for future use, according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph. When all the factors intertwine to form an organic whole, the conclusion we have to save money for the future is becoming more persuasive and we have to do so.
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