AA cereal 那个题这样写行不行

woshizengni

1 .cereal have more VK 不一定就受欢迎， 可能few people are at a shortage of vk,OR MUCH INTAKE will result in health problem

2. regular customers 本来就喜欢this brand of cereal，survey on them can't represent all cumstomers

3.declining sales is not only due to bad package. and should take the cost of the change into consideration

f__tomato

题目我没看，但你的第3个很明显有logic flaw,sales和cost是无关的，你最多说decling profit

woshizengni

补充一下题目

某个Cereal Manufacture公司的研究表明，该公司的Breakfast Cereal里含有75%的vitamine K，比市场上同类产品的多。另外通过公司对regular consumers的survey发现大部分消费者更加偏好这种Breakfast Cereal的口味。But the sales of the cereal is decreasing. The ad department of the company conclude that, many people are not aware of the two features(vitamine k & taste). In order to spread the advantages of the cereal, the company should redesign the front box of the cereal