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谢谢LZ 如果大家有北美GMAT范文精讲,这也是个参考.我尽量每天都会把有贡献精神,提供JJ的人所说的,尽量在这本书找到.你们看一下吧. 6/9 AI: P96/75 P140/87 P104/92 P132/65 P81/57 AA P208/28 P215/32 P185/16 P258/63 6/10 AI P69/39 P146/100 p57/27 p81/57 (the 2nd time) AA P178/13 P276/92 p228/39 p155/1 6/11 AI P148/104 P53/23 P41/12 P35/9 P132/68 p81/57 (the 2nd time) AA: P283/102 P250/52 P178/13(P.S 题干有些不同，不过同一概念radio advertising campaign leads its business grown dramatically 1， 人流量是否代表利润？ 2， CARLO的停滞是否有其他原因 3， 错误类比。——服装与音像。
参考范文的写作手法及逻辑错误，大致相同） 6/12 AI P67/37(2 times) P153/114 P148/104 (the 2nd time) P72/42 AA P278/94 (2 times) P250/52 (the 2nd time) p155/1 (the 2nd time) 6/15 AI P153/114 (the 2nd time) P69/39 (the 2nd time) AA P278/94 (the 3rd time) 现就那么多,有些找不到,在新题库里的吧 偶6月29日考,攒人品,祝偶好运哦! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 新题 AA The following appeared as part of a business plan by the Capital Idea Investment firm.
“Currently more and more books are becoming available in electronic form — either free of charge on the Internet or for a very low price per book on CD-ROM.* People who would not pay bookstore prices will now have access to whatever book they want from their home or work computers. Consequently, literary classics are likely to be read more widely than ever before: 72 percent of those responding to a recent online survey said they would read books in electronic form, and 81 percent said they believed that reading classic works was important. Given this newly developing market, we should invest in E-Classics, a new company that sells electronic versions of literary classics.”
*A CD-ROM is a small portable disc capable of storing relatively large amounts of data that can be read by a computer.
报纸的图书版的文章：
现在越来越多的书有了电子版，或者放在网上免费获得，或者在光盘上以很低的价格出售。因此文学经典可以得到比以前更广泛的阅读。不能以书店价格购买这些书的人现在可以用很少的钱或者不花钱来阅读他们。类似的，觉得去图书馆或者等待其他人还书不方便的人现在可以通过家里或者工作用的电脑得到他想要的任何名著。这和文学名著接触的增长将从根本上影响公众的阅读品味，塑造比以前更成熟更博学的读者。
分析: 1. More accesses to cheaper books do not necessarily guarantee the desire to read classics.
2. the survey is doubtful
3. It is hard to make profit when there are so many E-books available on the net.
范文 In this article the author concludes that literary classics are likely to be read more widely than ever before. The author’s line of reasoning is that the availability of books in electronic form and access of books via the Internet has removed the two major impediments that prevented people from reading literary classics, namely price and convenient access. Since books can be accessed from home or work via computers at little or no cost, the author believes that significant changes in the society will occur. Specifically, the author maintains that access to literary classics will affect the public’s taste in reading and will result in a more learned and cultured reading audience. The author’s argument is unconvincing for several reasons.
First, the author assumes that price and convenient access are the primary reasons people fail to read literary classics. While this is a tempting assumption, it is not obviously true.
For example, other reasons, such as lack of interest in these books or awareness of them on the part of the reading public could equally account for the failure to read them. Consequently, it may turn out that, contrary to the author’s expectation, the number of people who read literary classics is unaffected by their increased availability and lower cost.
Second, while it may be the case that access to books at affordable prices has increased as a result of new technology, the author provides no evidence for the assumption that access to literary classics at affordable prices has increased as well. On the face of it, this assumption seems innocuous; however there may be reasons that prevent literary classics from being marketed in the fashion described by the author. For example, the inability to secure the requisite permissions to reproduce these books in electronic form, or the lack of commercial interest in marketing them via the Internet could undermine the author’s assumption.
In conclusion, this argument is not convincing. To strengthen the argument the author would have to provide evidence for the assumption that price and accessibility are the main reasons people fail to read literary classics. Additionally, evidence would be required for the assumption that access to literary classics will be increased.
AA2. The following appeared in a memorandum from the development director of the Largo Piano Company.
“The Largo Piano Company has long been known for producing carefully handcrafted, expensive pianos used by leading concert pianists. During the past few years, however, our revenues have declined; meanwhile, the Allegro Musical Instrument Company introduced a line of inexpensive digital pianos and then saw its revenues increase. In order to increase Largo’s sales and in fact outsell Allegro, we should introduce a line of digital pianos in a variety of price ranges. Our digital pianos would be likely to find instant acceptance with customers, since they would be associated with the prestigious Largo name.” 分析
1， The increase of revenue may just coincided with the sale of inexpensive digital pianos, while the two actually had no causal realationship.
2， The strategy used in other companys may not be suit for the Largo Piano.
3， The expected instant acceptance with customers may not be the case. As the fact the author cited, the revenue of the Largo Piano have declined during the past five years, it may no longer own the prestige. 1， 销售降低的原因？——排除他因。
2， 错误类比
3， 是否会得到持续接受？销售连续下降也许已经说明show声誉的下降。
1， A公司销售额上升的真实原因是否由于数字钢琴生产线的引入
2， 适用于A公司的不一定适用于L公司
3， 价格的变化将带来产品市场定位的变化，可能会损坏品牌形象 AA The following appeared as part of a memorandum from the loan department of the Frostbite National Bank. ”We should not approve the business loan application of the local group that wants to open a franchise outlet for the Kool Kone chain of ice cream parlors. Frostbite is known for its cold winters, and cold weather can mean slow ice cream sales. For example, even though Frostbite is a town of 10,000 people, it has only one ice cream spot — the Frigid Cow. Despite the lack of competition, the Frigid Cow’s net revenues fell by 10 percent last winter”. 分析 (3Q CD上的一位好妹妹．考Ｇ700 真不错） 1)
False analogy：现有企业和新项目不能完全等同，存在的差异可能导致经营业绩不同；
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Causal oversimplification：城市的寒冬并不能说明产品一定没有很好市场，要做深入的市场调研，研究消费者偏好，制定好的产品战略； 3)
Hasty generalization：天气和现有企业两个证据不能充分得出不放贷的决定是明智的。 AI Public figures should avoid expressing opinions about things that they have not personally experienced or been directly affected by. 分析：(3Q CD上的一位好妹妹．祝明天考Ｇ成功） 首先作文界定范围，public figures，avoid，opinion, NOT personally experience. 1. 因为人们对于自己未亲身经历的事情了解不全面的话，容易造成偏激或者片面的结论。比如臭名鼎鼎的莎朗斯通在四川地震时的言论, 然后根据人道主义思想展开批判。这一段偏重于说亲身经历部分。 2. 因为很多事情都是受争议的，几乎都有两面性。对于那些对自己不受影响的话题擅自发表评论的话，会非常影响自己的公众形象。最近争议最大的就是加州小姐反对同性恋失去总冠军的位置，因为她伤害到了弱势群体的感情。因为人们都希望公众人物是全面的而不是狭隘的。这一段偏重于说自己不受影响。 3. 公众人物与我们普通人不一样，因为他们的言论和行为都能大大的影响一群人，所以更应该对自己的言论进行适当的克制，而不是对所有的事情，甚至没有亲身经历或者不受影响的话题都加以评论。当然，这不是说公众人物没有言论自由，往往有的很多时候他们更拥有言论自由并且更受到重视，随便再编上几个例子。 AI 影视作品，音乐作品中大量的暴力描写给这些作品带了了巨大的商业成功，因此我们应该在这些作品中增加暴力内容。 应该可以参照P85/59去写暴力描写的Disadvantage.不支持，我怎么觉得这么眼熟呢？不过找不到范文 AI 创新对企业会带来害处正如会带来好处一样 应该可以参照P152/111 其写作手法
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