是不是有模版的痕迹？——谁能帮我看看作文？

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是不是有模版的痕迹？

据说被看出用模版，基本作文就20分了，是这样吗？

题目：向朋友借钱或借朋友钱会损害朋友关系，你是否同意？

In view of the existing value widely hold in current sociey, some people may argue that it is a bad idea to turn to friends for financial aid. However, they may fail to take into account the fact that ture friends always pay little attention on money in making friends.

 

As far as i concerned, this answer should depend on different situations.

 

First of all, there is an old saying that "A Friend in need is a friend indeed", therefore to be a friend one should give his/her hand to his close friend when she/he is in trouble, including personal financial crisis. Take my friend FangFang for example, he is my college classmate, living next to my room in campus dormitory. We became close friend when we just step into university from high school. One day i forgot taking my wallet when shopping in a supermarket, forturnately he lent me 20 dollars without hesitation at such a urgent time. From then on, the relationship had been built. Now he and i have become the best friend, sharing each other’s both happiness and sadness.

 

Scondly, friendship can totally do nothing with money. In other words, lending money or not should not play a important or even a leading role in any relationship except commercial ones. Obviously, friendship departs from commercial relationship. Whether a friend borrowing funds or lending money to another mostly depends on his current financial standing and condition. If he has some spare money, he will assist his friend immediately. On the other hand, if he was in need too or just run out of money, it is still little possible for him to set aside a large sum of money to eliminating his friend’s problem. So from what has been discussed above, we can safely come to the conclusion that money has little influence on relationship between friends.

 

Thirdly, supposing that someone always borrows funds from people around him and never returns. He will absolutely lose all his friends and no one could help him especially in finance. His credit crisis would finally pay himself a heavy price back. The reason is quite straightforward. No one is bound to lend any money and give help to him in the hour of any kind of need. As an old Chinese saying goes, “Unless you cheat on your friends for not returning their money, you still got the opportunity to borrow them fund.” Thus, a person who have the strong and high level credit are able to keep al lot of friends.

 

In a word, borrowing or lending money with friend may not be so bad to friendship as many people expected and the foundation of such a relationship also would not be laid by finanical problem.