以下是引用slipknotjr在2009-5-3 1:36:00的发言:The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff, hissing and rearing back, broadens the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but, having no dangerous fangs and no venom, eventually, if its pursuer is not cowed by the performance, will fall over and play dead.
(A) broadens the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but, having no dangerous fangs and no venom, (B) broadens the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigns repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom, (C) broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigning repeated strikes, but it has no dangerous fangs and no venom, and (D) broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigns repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom, and (E) broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom, and
这里的平行结构我怎么觉得不是很舒服呢,答案给的 C, 我现觉得里面 but 后面的 it 指代不清,然后逗号后面的 and 和前面的句子也不是很清楚的并列结构,大家帮我看看吧,不是说with 可以跳跃修饰前面的名词吗?  这两天正好做到这个题目,我试着分析一下,大家批评指正啊: 1)主语The hognose snake 谓语puts on 宾语an impressive bluff,hissing and rearing back伴随状语,到了划线部分broaden就该判断是用动词与谓语put并列,还是动名词作伴随状语?这里,很显然broaden不能与put并列,因为不是主语snake broaden了,而是snake put on bluff这个动作broaden了,所以,应该用伴随状语 2)it的指代问题,我觉得很自然的会认为是hognose snake,而不会是a cobra,如果你还是认为指代不清楚,我也说不太明白,我就是读句子的时候自然而然认为it指代很清楚,没想那么多 3) 关于, and的问题,两个句子应该用连词连接 |