以下是引用TOM99在2009-3-1 15:26:00的发言:158.
Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease A. they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease B. after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine, they began growing again C. in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again D. with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular red wine, they began growing again E. a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started them growing again
能否说下BCDE分别错在哪里吗? A也不爽,why?最后那个with让我相当不爽 B没主语,谁report了?1991? C后面一个which带一个分词,太恶心了,干掉 D后边那个they说谁呢?我得琢磨,恶心,干掉 E后面那个them说谁呢?同D 回头看看A,顿觉是个好同志 |