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TOM99

158.   

 

Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease

A. they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease

B. after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine, they began growing again

C. in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again

D. with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular red wine, they began growing again

E. a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started them growing again

能否说下BCDE分别错在哪里吗？

sophia417

Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease
            

A. they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease ,they指代sales of wines是正确的，并且but前后并列得很工整。要不就:sales of wines declined ..., but they began.../ 要不就: sales of wines declined... but began ...

B. after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine, they began growing again ，they是无法指代sales of wines的，那么遥远，无法指代sales of wines的话，but前后就不是平行了。

C. in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again,which指代red wines错误,应该指代report. 

D. with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular red wine, they began growing again,but with的表达是错误的.除非没有得选了，才会考虑这个。不过一般我碰到的似乎都是错误的.

E. a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started them growing again,start doing sth或者start to do, 没有start sb doing的，且句子重心改变了.

tonect

以下是引用TOM99在2009-3-1 15:26:00的发言：

158.   

Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease

A. they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease

B. after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine, they began growing again

C. in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again

D. with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular red wine, they began growing again

E. a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started them growing again

能否说下BCDE分别错在哪里吗？

个人看法，仅供参考啊

首先读A的时候，得看出link... with...的句型，然后发现A有个consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine,这就要注意了，GMAT非常喜欢平行结构的

再看B，with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine。with 酒的消费，尤其是红酒 （不觉的别扭吗，应该是“尤其是红酒的消费”这样才算符合逻辑） 还有后面你的began growing 也不对，在这里应该是begin to do （没见过begin doing，但是一般都是begin to do）

C，moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine，这两个用and连接的部分根本不平行，前面应该是consumption of alcohol；which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease，其中which不能一起指代前面的两个内容，只能就近指代。还有最关键的一点错误，就是 caused them to begin to grow again，这个cause改变了原文的意思，原文根本没想表达“原因--结果”的关系，即使cause，那么cause的原因或许也该是report啊。

D，with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption，这个选项错误太多了，可以说句子结构的顺序是全部混乱，并且极其啰嗦，首先第一个with就不对，独立主格都跑出来了，不嫌麻烦。然后in 1991 report的位置就不对，放在这个位置很容易被理解为in 1991 report是修饰动词linked，那么言外之意就是，只有在1991年的report他们才link，在其他年的就不link了，这显然改变了意思。还有with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular red wine ，alcohol consumption 根本就不是在 red wine里的，alcohol consumption 和red wine consumption是并列的关系，最后they began growing 也错误

E. a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started them growing again 

link to用在这里不对，没有表达出要表达的意思；in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine，会被误认为是这两个黑体部分并列；started them growing 错误

[此贴子已经被作者于2009-3-1 16:05:35编辑过]

TOM99

明白了~ 很感激~

balabaladou7

以下是引用tonect在2009-3-1 16:04:00的发言：

个人看法，仅供参考啊

首先读A的时候，得看出link... with...的句型，然后发现A有个consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine,这就要注意了，GMAT非常喜欢平行结构的

再看B，with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine。with 酒的消费，尤其是红酒 （不觉的别扭吗，应该是“尤其是红酒的消费”这样才算符合逻辑） 还有后面你的began growing 也不对，在这里应该是begin to do （没见过begin doing，但是一般都是begin to do）

C，moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine，这两个用and连接的部分根本不平行，前面应该是consumption of alcohol；which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease，其中which不能一起指代前面的两个内容，只能就近指代。还有最关键的一点错误，就是 caused them to begin to grow again，这个cause改变了原文的意思，原文根本没想表达“原因--结果”的关系，即使cause，那么cause的原因或许也该是report啊。

D，with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption，这个选项错误太多了，可以说句子结构的顺序是全部混乱，并且极其啰嗦，首先第一个with就不对，独立主格都跑出来了，不嫌麻烦。然后in 1991 report的位置就不对，放在这个位置很容易被理解为in 1991 report是修饰动词linked，那么言外之意就是，只有在1991年的report他们才link，在其他年的就不link了，这显然改变了意思。还有with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular red wine ，alcohol consumption 根本就不是在 red wine里的，alcohol consumption 和red wine consumption是并列的关系，最后they began growing 也错误

E. a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started them growing again 

link to用在这里不对，没有表达出要表达的意思；in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine，会被误认为是这两个黑体部分并列；started them growing 错误

分析的非常好啊！赞！

提一点：begin to do和begin doing在GMAT的题里没有明确的prefer，begin doing也作为正确答案出现过，见大全870.

870. To maintain a high demand for their product, the manufacturers first took over the marketing and sales functions previously performed by outside agents; next, they began changing their advertising campaigns monthly to keep pace with the rapid changes in consumers’ lives.

(A) they began changing

(B) this began changing

(C) the former began changing

(D) to begin changing（A）
                

(E) to change

A．

 

balabaladou7

也把我的分析放在这里吧。

Sales of wines declined…,but they began to…after…report that linked…of…,and particularly of…with….

 

A. 正确。Link…consumption of…, and particularly of…修饰对象对称。began to和began growing都可以。

B. 将consumption和red wine进行类比，比较对象不对等。began to和began growing都可以。

C. and particularly of red wine，改变了原义强调alcohol中的wine，变成了并列。Which的先行词变成了wine，改变了原句修饰alcohol consumption的意思。最重要的是，主句的意思变成了moderate alcohol consumption使得Sales of wines开始增长了。

D. in a 1991 report的位置不对，使得这种联系只发生在1991年report里，而不是1991年report反应出来的。将consumption和red wine进行类比，比较对象不对等。With独立主格使用awkward。

E. in a 1991 report位置错，同D。and in particular red wine造成和in a 1991 report平行，改变原句意思。started them growing错。原句意思变成a reduced risk
        started them growing错。

fhmmj

请问这里“，and particularly of‘的and是什么用法啊？是并列的话，为什么前面会有’呢？

好好学习

同问  对前面的那个“，” 感到疑惑？？？？？

wzsgdtc

受教了。。

china101

particularly只能做副词，particularly of red wine这么看来不是作名词了么？副词还可以被修饰么？？