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找到一篇范文，仅供大家参考 .我个人感觉此人语言高深，用词强悍，值得研究，但是貌似套了模板，自己的观点表达的很含糊。 The value of any nation should be measured more by its scientific and artistic achievements than by its business successes.”
The value of any nation is broadly debated topic that attracted many people attentions. In his argument, the author alleges that the value of any nation should be measured more by its scientific and artistic achievements than by its business successes. However, the author does not necessarily extend this broad contention to a changeless example while overlooking certain compelling causes impacting on the issue. Moreover, the issue is so controversial and complicated that many people may hold on their individual opinions to face such issue because of their different culture, experience, and background. Because in fact there is no general explanation to answer the issue, the final conclusion depends on a cautious analysis. As far as I am concerned, I partially agree with the author that the value of any nation should be more measured by its scientific and artistic achievements, but I do not agree with him that the value of any nation should be measured more by its scientific and artistic achievements than by its business successes.
First of all, it is judicious to admit point of the issue even though such point may suffer from some explicit shortcoming, form some merits primarily because the rationale behind the author’s assertion according with common sense and our experience as human beings, hence is fundamentally indisputable. For example, an advanced technology such as the discovery of computer, the Internet, and communicative equipment can result in linking with the world conveniently. Besides, artistic achievement also can increase the quality of our life, and cease our pressure in the modern society. However, the author could effortlessly explain the scenario, in which business behavior plays an important role in modern nation. Therefore, I tend to concede that when it comes to some certain circumstances it is partially appropriate.
In addition, before recognizing that a more appropriate reason must incorporate aspects of the issue as sufficient as possible, I need to point out my argument with the author who, while he exaggerated the point of the importance of artistic and scientific achievement, neglects some determinative factors at which people often thoughtlessly take a look. Thus, the point for me to argue is that we totally do not engage in any activities if we do not have enough assets to invest. To strengthen the point of the issue, I have to consider whether the nation owns enough assets to develop other activities. For some developing nation, it is important to stimulate the economy of nation. Hence, in some standpoint, I do not agree with the author that the value of any nation should be measured more by its scientific and artistic achievements than by its business successes.
In conclusion, the issue of value of nation is a complex and comprehensive, requiring subjective judgment. So different are the personal experience, personality type among people with diverse culture that thousand individual might possess thousand opinions towards the issue. In the final analysis, according to me, the value of nation primarily depends on its economic circumstance.
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