08.12 作文AA汇总--(update 09年1月1日早晨)

rainsun

3.The following appeared in a memorandum from the head of a human resources department at a major automobile manufacturing company to the company's managers:
“Studies have found that employees of not-for-profit organizations and charities are often more highly motivated than employees of for-profit corporations to perform well at work when their performance is not being monitored or evaluated. Interviews with employees of not-for-profit organizations suggest that the reason for their greater motivation is the belief that their work helps to improve society. Because they believe in the importance of their work, they have personal reasons to perform well, even when no financial reward is present. Thus, if our corporation began donating a significant portion of its profits to humanitarian causes, our employees’ motivation and productivity would increase substantially and our overall profits would increase as well.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.

请问这一篇应该怎么反驳呢？多谢。

yuzhi51

3.The following appeared in a memorandum from the head of a human resources department at a major automobile manufacturing company to the company's managers:
“Studies have found that employees of not-for-profit organizations and charities are often more highly motivated than employees of for-profit corporations to perform well at work when their performance is not being monitored or evaluated. Interviews with employees of not-for-profit organizations suggest that the reason for their greater motivation is the belief that their work helps to improve society. Because they believe in the importance of their work, they have personal reasons to perform well, even when no financial reward is present. Thus, if our corporation began donating a significant portion of its profits to humanitarian causes, our employees’ motivation and productivity would increase substantially and our overall profits would increase as well.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.

请问这一篇应该怎么反驳呢？多谢。

个人意见：1、错误类比  2、增加人文关怀不一定员工就会motivated 3、motivated不一定profit 4、studied可能不对。。。

Jade_

谢谢楼主的辛苦付出

考试就靠它了

littleJ

不好意思问一下，是不是考试的时候还会考到不是官方题库里面的文章呀？我看“非黄金范文”部分的好像都找不到呀

張琇琄

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guting109

AA: 就是那个music store(Disc Depot)和clothing store的。12.13一战，Pennsylvania，760，Q50，V41，少量JJ

rfanrfan

AA

9. The following appeared in the opinion column of a financial magazine.

“On average, middle-aged consumers devote 39 percent of their retail expenditure to department store products and services, while for younger consumers the average is only 25 percent. Since the number of middle-aged people will increase dramatically within the next decade, department stores can expect retail sales to increase significantly during that period. Furthermore, to take advantage of the trend, these stores should begin to replace some of those products intended to attract the younger consumer with products intended to attract the middle-aged consumer.”

12月13号 JJ 北美（国内14号凌晨）gflvyy

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蚊子漫步

看了前面很多人问Breakfast Crunch这道题，题目感觉是不完整的，有人能再详细说说吗，谢谢

ktkoalaml

LZ~~~今天我考到的AA不是题库里的，回家翻了好久都没有找到

记得大概讲的是由于工业的污染，造成某一地区旅游业的收入下降，因此一项关于建立...计划被提出，建立这个就能提高以后的REVENUE并且使在旅游业中事业的人能够重新工作，如果不建立，就会导致REVENUE的持续下降和经济更加恶化。

上海

annachen0123

以下是引用ktkoalaml在2008-12-16 1:14:00的发言：

LZ~~~今天我考到的AA不是题库里的，回家翻了好久都没有找到

记得大概讲的是由于工业的污染，造成某一地区旅游业的收入下降，因此一项关于建立...计划被提出，建立这个就能提高以后的REVENUE并且使在旅游业中事业的人能够重新工作，如果不建立，就会导致REVENUE的持续下降和经济更加恶化。

上海

谢谢ktkoalaml MM,

亲爱的苏

谢谢LZ