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 When it come to success, althrough some people think that the success comes from the careful planning, others stick on taking risks brings the success. I am, and probably will always be, one of those believe that continued success in life is the result of careful planning as well as taking risks.My arguments for the point are listed as follows.

   On one hand, careful planning ,which is a requisite part of life, can reduce the risk of loss. Old man always told us that a careful plan can direct you to the road to success. A careful plan, first and foremost, can make the people concentrate on the goal what she or he wants to achieve. As we all know, concentratiion is the key point of ones success, and a careful plan can easily help the people, who is often pay lots of attention on the trivials. Second, the plan can make people keep on working hard to achieve the the goal no matter how difficult the trouble he or she have meet.Suppose that if  Xiang Liu,a famous
Chinese 110 metre hurdler,had not execute the plan he made and not fix enough attention on the training, he would never had had the chance to tie the 11-year-old world record of 12.91 seconds. Liu was the first Chinese man to win an Olympic gold medal in athletics.

   On the other hand, take chances is necessary on the way to success.Only prepare for trouble, take risks for success.The company is Bloomsbury Publishing PLC; its runaway success, the Harry Potter series of young-adult fantasy novels. The first five books in the series have sold well over 200 million copies worldwide, largely under the company's imprint. Bloomsbury is the latest company to face one of the business world's most underestimated challenges: "windfall economics." Maybe sometimes when we take risks, we may failed. But the more ofen we fail, the closer we are to success.

   The above support an unshakeable conclusion that not only careful planning but also taking risks brings the success.

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结尾实在是不知道怎么变长一些，谢谢。。。期待被拍的作文。第一篇作文，三天后就要进考场了。不知道前面的岁月我在做甚么，只知道剩下的日子，我要多写努力写作文

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122.Even a topic called Economics borned in the aim to study how to make the limited resource to satisfy the people`s unlimited desire. Maybe the statement that people are never satisfied about what they have has quite a bit of truth to it in today's society. Individuals today are constantly driven to havethe newest and the best, the brightest in such a consumer society.  The word "never" still may be exaggerated, most of times in one's life the people are always want something more or something new.

In the memory of childhood, people have little chance to get satisfied in the childhood. Even without the advertisement everywhere and other things  to stimulate us to search for the new thing, the better thing, the people will try to improve the life. The majority of us come from environments where we either had enough or more than enough porvided to us. Look back my life, we can not hard to find that every time, when our parents bring us to buy things, we have to make choice, never get anything we want.

The idea does not only relate to consumer goods. Maybe sometimes we will not easy to satisfy in the spiritual world. We chase for the respect and admiration from others. Take Xiang Liu for example, as a famous Chinese atheletes in 110-meter hurdles, after pull out the Olympic Games in 2008, he is believeing that respect is also an important thing he seized. Now he practice more hard for the future, though he made a perfect fly in the Olympic game in 2004.In the future, sometimes even the drop is for future, in this way get the success.

Obviously, in all of life the unsatisfaction make the progress of our world. Maybe when we are old enough to realize the truth of life, we may easier to learn to be satisfied. On that day, walk in the sun with the lover hand in hand can be the whole life. Happiness is something we long for and hard to find.If a person is trully satisfied in all aspects of their life, then, without a doubt, they will be very happy.

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我自己顶一下。。。

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这里好冷清啊，我可怜的帖子，我都不用顶，都悬挂在上方。