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 楼主| 发表于 2004-1-12 12:07:00 | 只看该作者
In order to lower their operating  risk, the risk as putting all eggs into one basket, world's  largest corporations take into account globalization which ,although not quite smooth in some countries, last decade or two saw great success, brought the similarity to all over the world.
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-1-12 12:14:00 | 只看该作者
Sentence correction! Those who can point out mistakes will be awarded.
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发表于 2004-1-12 13:24:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用carawayt在2004-1-12 9:44:00的发言:
小鸭鸭的又一馊主意~~~

Support!
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发表于 2004-1-12 22:00:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用Snazzy在2004-1-12 12:14:00的发言:
Sentence correction! Those who can point out mistakes will be awarded.


run-on sentence.

money, money, money!!!!!!
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-1-13 01:07:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用joice在2004-1-12 22:00:00的发言:

run-on sentence.

money, money, money!!!!!!


hi, nobody, here is a penny for you ... ha ha  ...




[此贴子已经被作者于2004-1-13 13:46:00编辑过]
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发表于 2004-1-13 01:42:00 | 只看该作者
Snazzy, I have to type my composition in the test. I am not familiar with the typing English. What shall I do ?
I wanna join your group
Like u, I will type in English as much as possible
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-1-13 03:03:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用欧阳可情在2004-1-13 1:42:00的发言:
Snazzy, I have to type my composition in the test. I am not familiar with the typing English. What shall I do ?
I wanna join your group
Like u, I will type in English as much as possible


BIENVUE!!! Ke Qing.
Only with a lot of practice in many ways, one of which would be to come here with your prepared sentences, can you improve your typing, a critical factor that will have shaping influence to decide whether you have enough time to finish, let alone articulate your article.
18#
发表于 2004-1-13 13:12:00 | 只看该作者
其实未必。

首先是审题和结构,然后才是语言。

语言问题,关键是少错和多样化,长短句结合、句式多变才是最好的。

人批的话,看句子是否有歧义,机器则看句子成分是否正确。
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发表于 2004-1-13 19:34:00 | 只看该作者
I got 6 in awa. And I think the reason might be that I used a lot of phrases in my daily work, e.g. GAAP (Generally Accepted Accouting Method) and other auditing jargons....
haha
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-1-14 04:01:00 | 只看该作者
That you got 6 in AWA, in my opinion, might be attributible to what they would think of professionism by using some jargons which, however other reasons , could not be easily understood. After viewing the other samples , I am even more confident that I should be sticking to what I think is right to change teh fact that my article is still like the one I wrote when I was in secondary school.
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