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(斑竹看下)附上批改的作文,真的是Bleeding,只有3.5该怎么办那?

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楼主
发表于 2008-4-9 20:23:00 | 只看该作者

(斑竹看下)附上批改的作文,真的是Bleeding,只有3.5该怎么办那?

眼看就要考试了,作文才写过这一篇,让XDF给我批改了,出来个这么多错误,而且只有3。5分,该怎么办啊?

平时懒,不愿意写,现在什么七踪罪根本也用不上去,都不知道怎么把他们挂钩,哎,有没有什么应付的办法啊

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沙发
发表于 2008-4-9 22:59:00 | 只看该作者

发一篇文章来看看

你也可以看下我的签名档的帖子

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2008-4-9 23:07:00 | 只看该作者

原来是斑竹啊,我也本来想发上来,可是贴上来之后格式和修改的红色都没有了。

不知道有什么办法没?

地板
发表于 2008-4-10 13:50:00 | 只看该作者

我把你的附件下过来好了呵呵

5#
发表于 2008-4-11 15:08:00 | 只看该作者

我看完了

xdf的修改还是不错 关键是你犯了太多基础错误了

一定要注意 不然真的很影响分数

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