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第一次来cd来向各位牛人请教,牛人们快来拍砖啊!(据说标题一定要写得长不然阿,没人看)

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楼主
发表于 2008-2-20 16:37:00 | 只看该作者

第一次来cd来向各位牛人请教,牛人们快来拍砖啊!(据说标题一定要写得长不然阿,没人看)

Agree/Disagree:
Parents are the best teachers.

            
No one would object to the fact that of great importance are our parents, who gave birth to us and raise us up until we are mature and strong enough while they themselves, gradually growing old and weak and becoming the ones that need our love and care. With absolutely no doubt, I support the view that parents are our best teachers.

Who are the ones that first taught us to walk and to speak? Who are the ones who first held us in their arms and read the children’s book for us? Who are the ones who first let go their hand which previously grasped the back of the bicycle when they saw us being able to ride it alone? It’s our parents. They are always the first ones to teach us knowledge from all aspects of life when we are still free of any other kind of ethical educations. Before we go to schools and universities to pursue further study, we are actually graduating from our parents’ school, which has kept on educating us for the most early but substantial six or seven years in our lives. When we become students of other people, we base the new all the new things taught by them on the knowledge taught by our parents. We can easily draw the conclusion from above that our parents are more influential than our teachers in schools, however, parents do a lot more than that.

Not only do our parents teach us all kinds of knowledge when we were little, but they also set themselves as role models for us so that we can learn how to be as good as they are from the real cases manifested by themselves. Take myself for example, on the one hand, I never have to worry about how to be successful in my career, because my mum’s diligent and creative figure in her office has been kept on teaching me what I need to become successful for over ten years; on the other hand, I never have to consider about how to be honest with people around me either, given that my dad’s integrity and honesty to other people has always inspired me to treat others nicely. Parents teach us everything we needed from our observation to their ways of living.

To sum up, by teaching us in the earliest stage of our lives and influencing us by setting themselves as role models for us in the rest of our lives, our parents are of no doubt the best teachers in all time. Don’t ever let go the chance to learn from them.

3月2号就要考了,时间紧迫!小弟的生死存亡就靠各位了!


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沙发
发表于 2008-2-20 18:49:00 | 只看该作者

文章结构不错,可是注意低级的一些语法错误要尽量避免 

板凳
发表于 2008-2-21 22:47:00 | 只看该作者

我也是3月2号考。。 感觉LZ用词可以再华丽一点~多使用些难词吧

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