T-4-Q4

aeoluseros

umm...或许得修改下那句总结了，我也不知道哪里看来得..

不过OG11-130里面确实指出来that不能够只能，要用who.

130.
            As a result of medical advances, many people that might at one time have died as children of such infections as diphtheria, pneumonia, or rheumatic fever now live well into old age.

(A) that might at one time have died as children

(B) who might once have died in childhood

(C) that as children might once have died

(D) who in childhood might have at one time died

(E) who, when they were children, might at one time have died

Parallelism + Agreement

The sentence has one error in pronoun usage and two errors in parallelism. The pronoun who, rather than that, should be used to refer to people.

Once, not the ambiguous and wordy at one time, is parallel to the adverb now, and in childhood, not as children, is parallel to into old age. Parallel structure involves not only how parallel elements are formed but also where they are placed in the sentence: here adverbs (once and now) should be placed first, followed by verbs (have died and five), and then by prepositional phrases (in childhood and into old age).

A     Who should replace that; once should replace at one time, in childhood should replace as children

B     Correct. This sentence correctly uses who to refer to people, parallel structures are maintained by using once to parallel now and in childhood to parallel into old age.

C     Who should replace that, in childhood should replace as children and should be placed after died to be parallel in position to into old age

D    Once should replace at one time, the parallel elements should appear in parallel positions

E     When they were children is awkward and not parallel to into old age in wording or placement; once should replace at one time

aeoluseros

恩，语法书上查了，that是可以指代人，不过多半使用who,whom.

看来还是依照OG的了。

littlesharon

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

A.    Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B.    She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlof in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won(1.形容词序数词以及最高级后面要用to do  2.gmat里定语从句修饰人只能用who、whom作关系代词)

C.    Selma Lagerlof was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning(形容词序数词以及最高级后面要用to do)
D.    A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlof became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win（相对a，感觉这个比较有效）
E.    As novelist, Selma Lagerlof turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won  gmat里定语从句修饰人只能用who、whom作关系代词

aeoluseros

ao...that指人是语法书里说的，不过这几天review时我发现，prep和OG11里面好几个例子了不接受that能够指人。

the first woman和the first Swedish writer应该是并列的，就跟concrete和glass一样是平等的两样东西，所以最好用and，而不是用as well as, A as well as B里面，B只是附加的，谓语动词是由A决定的(prep里面有一题如此，BY里面也有提到)。anyway...我想这不能算是什么大毛病吧..

kuaidao

请斑竹&NNS解释下：

1.最高级后面用to do? 为啥子呢？ 

2.what / ing构成限定关系?

3.A中的D2个was是不是很好，可读起来也还算紧凑啊，总比下面的来得爽快啊。

A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlof became in 1909
                        the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win

不胜感激！！！！

等待求解

2.what / ing构成限定关系?

3.A中的D2个was是不是很好，可读起来也还算紧凑啊，总比下面的来得爽快啊。

A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlof became in 1909
                the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win

不胜感激！！！！

等待求解

aeoluseros

以下是引用kuaidao在2008-12-18 13:22:00的发言：

请斑竹&NNS解释下：

1.最高级后面用to do? 为啥子呢？ 

2.what / ing构成限定关系?

3.A中的D2个was是不是很好，可读起来也还算紧凑啊，总比下面的来得爽快啊。

A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlof became in 1909
      the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win

不胜感激！！！！

等待求解

2.what / ing构成限定关系?

3.A中的D2个was是不是很好，可读起来也还算紧凑啊，总比下面的来得爽快啊。

A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlof became in 1909
      the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win

不胜感激！！！！

等待求解

1、这是语法规则

2、what不能构成限定关系啊?是指that/ing吗？

3、关于D里面in 1909位置不好的问题：
这题，我们不能简单的套用OG的规则。变化中寻求规律才是根本
Selma Lagerlof became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
按理说，in 1909应该放在句末，作为became的状语，但是如果放在句末，会产生 Nobel prize for literature in 1909的修饰错误。此外， became the first woman and the first... 宾语非常的长，所以后置，结构非常优美。
所以，本题可以合理的把in 1909 前置，而不会产生awarkward的感觉。
状语的位置也并没有绝对的原则，只是有一个优先级别而已。

cynthiak

这里and also很碍眼,第一次看到and also成为正确选项的。

要怎么理解呢？

AlienX

and also跟but also的also都可以省...不省也沒什麼大問題...

tonylin0824

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hang13

继续顶！！