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楼主
发表于 2008-2-18 08:29:00 | 只看该作者

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Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the
peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof
was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first
Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

A.  
 Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the
peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof
was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first
Swedish writer to win
B.    She turned away from literary realism
and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of
northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlof in 1909 became the first
woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C.    Selma
Lagerlof was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write
romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first
Swedish writer winning
D.    A novelist who turned away from
literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and
landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlof became in 1909 the first
woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E.    As novelist,
Selma Lagerlof turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic
stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in
1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

I picked C because:
- "to win" is wrong, so I eliminate A and D.
- "writer that won" is wrong too because "that" cannot refer to a person, so I eliminate B and E.

Anyone knows why "to win" is correct?

Thanks in advance.
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沙发
发表于 2008-2-18 09:00:00 | 只看该作者

c has a flaw in the sentence

she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
in addition to means along with

the two parts should be parallel

in addition to distort the meaning of the sencentence

i never heard a rule saying  "to win" is wrong 

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2008-2-18 16:00:00 | 只看该作者

i thought that 'the first woman' was parallel to "the first Swedish".

also, I thought that 'to+verb' modifies the main verb in the preceding clause; in this case, "to win" modifies "became" - doesn't make much sense to me =(

also, 'verb-ing" right behind a noun usually modifies that noun; so C seems more approipate to me .

do I misunderstand???

thanks in advance.

地板
发表于 2008-4-7 16:17:00 | 只看该作者
A 中的第二个was显得wordy
5#
发表于 2008-10-5 12:02:00 | 只看该作者

E.     As novelist, Selma Lagerlof turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish write that won

E为什么不对?

6#
 楼主| 发表于 2008-10-5 12:32:00 | 只看该作者
E的write少了一個r, 剛補上去....
that不能指代一個人
7#
 楼主| 发表于 2008-11-1 09:10:00 | 只看该作者
umm...還是沒看到C有什麼問題...
8#
发表于 2008-11-1 10:13:00 | 只看该作者

who, whom只能指人,不可指物(如language,要用which指代);  which只能指物,不可指人
that可以指人和物,但不可指人的所有格,要用whose, whose可以指人也可以指物
...
貌似跟alienX兄说的有点出入...
--
umm...原文在这里
http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/327791/Selma-Lagerlof
---
除了并列的问题,关于to win和winning...
我觉得ing短语是一种限定...
而不定式短语是一种主谓关系...
所以这里应该是主谓关系更加恰当
---
总觉得D的时间状语位置很不好,但是貌似毛病没C的大...OG里有说过把主谓拆开不好,语法书里面也说时间状从应该放句首或句尾。
anyway, 好是不好,但没说过不可以...没有像to do中间插东西一样是一个arbitrary rule...

who, whom只能指人,不可指物(如language,要用which指代);  which只能指物,不可指人
that可以指人和物,但不可指人的所有格,要用whose, whose可以指人也可以指物
...
貌似跟alienX兄说的有点出入...
--
umm...原文在这里
http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/327791/Selma-Lagerlof
---
除了并列的问题,关于to win和winning...
我觉得ing短语是一种限定...
而不定式短语是一种主谓关系...
所以这里应该是主谓关系更加恰当
---
总觉得D的时间状语位置很不好,但是貌似毛病没C的大...OG里有说过把主谓拆开不好,语法书里面也说时间状从应该放句首或句尾。
anyway, 好是不好,但没说过不可以...没有像to do中间插东西一样是一个arbitrary rule...


[此贴子已经被作者于2008-11-1 10:32:21编辑过]
9#
发表于 2008-11-1 10:35:00 | 只看该作者

um...貌似排版很成问题

补充一下:我觉得ing短语跟E的that引导定语从句犯的错误是一样的...都成了限定关系...

open to discussion

10#
 楼主| 发表于 2008-11-1 11:01:00 | 只看该作者
umm...thanks for posting the source.
that可以指代人嗎? 可以給個OG/Prep/GWD/grammar book上的例句嗎?
umm...C中的"the first woman" 跟 "the first Swedish writer" 的並列有什麼問題呢? 看不出 =(
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