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Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
A couple of days ago, when I was chatting with one of my girlfriends, she kept on grounching about how wordy her parents were and showed great eagerness in moving out as soon as she reached eighteen. Shocked as I was at her complaint, I would personally choose to live with my families for a longer time, not only because living with them could offer me convenience in seeking for advice concerning to some dilemmas which I would encounter in my workplace, but it would also contribute to our love and care for each other.
Adults as we are, there are still some considerations that we fail to take into account when making decisions. Being accompanied with our family members who are willing to share our troubles would provide us with abundant suggestions and feasible solutions. What is more, as the Chinese saying goes, seniors are more judicious. Because of their rich experiences, parents are capable of offering suggestions with more considerations. Currently, even though the rapid development of technology would shorten the distances between families living in two cities, only living with them would offer us a face to face talk. This sort of convenience is invaluable in seeking for advices.
Additionally, living with families helps us show our care and love to each other. The experience of my friend is a perfect example to illustrate this point. As she was brought up by her grandmother, there is little communication between her and her parents. Once during her mother’s visit, she got a severe cold and stayed bed for several days. Her mother showed sincere care during her illness, taking her to the hospital in the midnight, staying up to prepare some Chinese herbal medicine for her. After my friend’s recover, her mother and she became much close. Once she joked with me, but for her ailment, she would never notify how much her mother loves her. Only living with our families, can we truly understand our families’ love and only when we are living together, can we have a media to show our love.
As the great convenience brought by living with our families and the spiritual care that we can give to each other are concerned, I would certainly prefer to live with them for a longer time, even when I reach my adulthood.
第一次写作，对评分要求不是很懂，望大家多多指教 
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