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Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible.Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time.Which of these situations do you think is better?Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

 

 

Families are considered as the basis of one’s life,they give us love,care and help when we are in difficulties.Therefore,I share the point with many others that young adults are supposed to live with their families for a longer time ,compared with being independent from parents as soon as possible.

 

 

In the first place,many of the young adults may need financial support from their families.Although a large number of these young adults have a certain level of education background,the umemployment crisis still exist and troubles all the countries.Therefore,it is not a easy task to get a satisfied job to support living immediately after graduation from universities.This makes it possible that we need the help from our families and live with them at least can save the rent of a room.

 

 

In addition,families could also help one by giving physically care,which means one can get out the trouble of doing all the housework himself. Undoubtedly,the laze of young people should not be supported but it is also a fact that they need a period to adjust to the society and new enviroment which calls for a lot time and energy.Just imagine,after a day of hard work or study,one could eat tasty food cooked by his parents without worrying about what to cook and how to cook,Isn’t that good?Living with families longer can definitely give one a chance to pay more attention to his work and study and make more progress, which do not mean these young adults are not independent ,just a little help are needed at the beginning.

    

Last but not the least,the society and people in this society are so sophisticated that young adults are prone to be cheated or get hurt.In this situation,youths are really supposed to spend more time with their elder families,especially with their parents,to talk about troubles they face and get appropriate solutions instead of rushing to conclusions made by themselves.Once my friend wanted to lend a big amount of money to a “friend” about whom he did not know much,for he thought the guy was honest and kind.He metioned this,however,in a talk with his farther by accident;his farther prevented him from doing so after listened to his discription and expressed the suspicion which turn out to be right at last.

 

 

In conclusion,the disadvantages of living with families for young adults are certainly exist but it can easily overwhelmed by the advantages.For the young adults are not mature enough to face all the difficuties themselves;some help from their parents and families could help them to cope with the troubles better.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-12-6 20:11:29编辑过]