第一篇作文，下個月考試了，好怕。請大家狠狠的批判吧。

cissie0907

    People should encourage reading books about the real events, real people and other base on real. Is that good for us? Some body in favor of this point, however, as to me, I cast doubt it. In my opinion, people should be encouraged to read different kinds books, such as fictions, poems and so on.

     The main reason why hold the view is that some imagined fictions can offer an outlet to relax and avoid the real word. The fiction not only let people to concentrate on the story for relax, but also make us to associate the fate of the characters. For instance, a love story always makes us to think about the meaning of the true love. Also in the love story, we always get the information that the characters devote themselves to love, and then we always hope them can get marriage and have a happy life. In the story, for majority people, we can get satisfactory that we can not get from the real word.

     Another more reason is that, readers can get lesson from fables or myth stories, especially for children. In my childhood, my parents required me to read a lot fables. It is helpful for me to get lesson into the fable. For example, I have a essential influence on the story about "Early birds get the worms". In the story, I get insight in working hard is significant for our study, life and work.

      Last, but not least. We get fun from the children's stories. Not only children, but also adults should have to reading children' s stories. Such as a children's stories called <mechanic cat>, which written by a Japanese writer, t is a funny story for adults and children. Meanwhile, we can share it with our children to promote the relationship.

       As all discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that people should encourage read books both about real word and fictions that not established the real world.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-11-17 22:51:30编辑过]

alexwithibt

这篇文章写的非常好.字数也够了. 加油.

我改了第2段(其实无需再改. 我认为你原来写的已经非常好了).

The main reason why hold the view is that some imagined fictions can offer an outlet to relax and avoid the real word. The fiction not only let people to concentrate on the story for relax, but also make us to associate the fate of the characters. For instance, a love story always makes us to think about the meaning of the true love. Also in the love story, we always get the information that the characters devote themselves to love, and then we always hope them can get marriage and have a happy life. In the story, for majority people, we can get satisfactory that we can not get from the real word.

 

(Modern fictions offer us an outlet to relax is the primary reason why I uphold this viewpoint. Some research institutes demonstrate that common people tend to associate themselves with protagonists in fictions, and imagine episodes really occurring on themselves. This, however, is the best prescription to alleviate pressure. For instance, a love story inevitably allows me immerse into pondering on meaning of love and life. The pleasant and sweet love of prince and princess in fictions is invariably appealing to me. I even imagine one day I would have acquired the essence of love and live forever with my prince. Accordingly, to strive for my dream, I never lost confidence while facing any formidable matters during my daily life.)

 

cissie0907

首先，謝謝alexwithibt。。其實，我在10 20得考試中作文只有15.很受打擊，所以拿了一篇考前得文章給大家看看。究竟作文出在什麽問題，真的好打擊得作文分數。唉。。。

alexwithibt

以下是引用cissie0907在2007-11-18 21:20:00的发言：

首先，謝謝alexwithibt。。其實，我在10 20得考試中作文只有15.很受打擊，所以拿了一篇考前得文章給大家看看。究竟作文出在什麽問題，真的好打擊得作文分數。唉。。。

从这篇文章中看不出来你有啥大的问题.  考试时你的第2篇作文多少? limit, fair?

lisy

稍微改了一下，以供参考

People should encouraged reading books about the real events, real people and other base on real. Is that good for us? Some people body in favor of this point, however, as to me, I cast doubts
                on it. In my opinion, people should be encouraged to read different kinds of books, such as including fictions, poems and so on.

     The main reason why I uphold this view is that some imagined fictions can offer an outlet to relax and avoid the real word. The fiction not only let people to concentrate on the story for relax, but also make us to associate the fates of the characters. For instance, a love story always makes us to think about the meaning of the true love. Also in the love story, we always get the information that the characters devote themselves to love, and then we always hope them can get marriage and have a happy life. In the story, for to majority people, we can get satisfactory that we can not get from the real word. 

     Another more reason is that, readers, especially children, can get lessons from fables or myth stories, especially for children. In my childhood, my parents required me to read a lot fables. It is helpful for me to get lesson into from the fable. For example, I have an essential influence on The story about "Early birds get the worms" has an essential influence on me. In the story, I got insight in working hard is significant for our study, life and work.

      Last, but not least. We get fun from the children's stories. Not only children, but also adults should have to reading children's stories. Such as a children's stories called <mechanic cat>, which written by a Japanese writer, t is a funny story for adults and children. Meanwhile, we can share it with our children to promote the relationship.

       As all discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that people should encouraged read books both about real word and fictions that not established the real world.

cissie0907

 fair.....二戰在12.10.時間緊迫