还剩一个星期了，急，求拍。。

HANHAN12

TWE027

027 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Mencius, one of the greatest philosophers of ancient China, commented that "not all the things enjoyable during everyday life" . Should people do things that they do not enjoy doing? The way I see it, the answer should be yes.

For starter, there are many things people cannot change. For example, their families and their abilities. A girl may be reluctant to look after her stepfather who treats her badly, but she has to take care of him because it will ruin her reputation if she does not, and it is compulsory. A boy who wants become a great painter may feel disappoint when the doctor tell him that his ability of recognizing different colors is terrible, so he had better have another dream. When facing the facts people can not change, he/she should do the right things not what they enjoy.

There is another solid argument for people should sometimes do things they do not enjoy doing in order to get better result. Sometimes what people like doing is not the best they should do. Facts witness and present many examples. Chen Hu is one of my best friends, he is highly interested in football, and he plays football with his friends nearly every afternoon during high school time. However, every time when the final test is around the corner, Chen Hu will stop playing football but study all day long. He told me that is the secret of being No.1 of the class every time.

Everyone wants to do the things which they enjoy, but sadly it is always not the case. Live is comprised of many experiences and varied responsibilities, considering the unchangeable and the special occasion, people should do the right things not the enjoyable one.

 

 

 

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-11-15 23:43:13编辑过]

HANHAN12

能帮忙看下么？？

谢谢！！

bunuli

来点短句

alexwithibt

字数差了些. 另外,2,3段的例最好换一个.

Mencius, one of the greatest philosophers of ancient China, commented that "not all the things enjoyable during everyday life" . Should people do things that they do not enjoy doing? The way I see it, the answer should be yes.

 

(Mencius, one of the greatest philosophers of ancient China, commented that "not all the things we do are enjoyable". I strongly uphold his notion. Especially in modern society, bend to external pressure, we have to sacrifice our dream to waste energy on what we are not interesting in at all. Sometimes, we pursue specific work so arduous and bored that it is never appealing to us, yet in return we may appreciate the benefits that it brings. )

HANHAN12

非常感谢！！！！

字数是差了点。。30分钟实在不够时间写。。。

我再改改看

谢谢大家！！！！

suvtong

A
boy who wants become a great painter may feel disappoint when the
doctor tell him that his ability of recognizing different colors is
terrible。
ability 对应 terrible 有点勉强。
you can change it to     tell him that he is disability or incapacity to recognizing the different.

还有总结构上看，我感觉第二段论述不是很清晰。我个人觉得例子举的有点偏，其实学习，工作都可以说，比你用的例子要好理解，也更加容易写好。比如你说学习要坚持，有的时候就要hard work and insist 。工作是首先是为了生存，然后再是发展，不可能所有人都喜欢自己的工作，必须要坚持，才能做好什么的。