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好紧张明天就要考了,作文是我最担心的地方,请大家帮我看看给我些建议,谢谢

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楼主
发表于 2007-10-20 18:23:00 | 只看该作者

好紧张明天就要考了,作文是我最担心的地方,请大家帮我看看给我些建议,谢谢

 

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Which is more important: spending your time working at your job or spending time with your family.

 

Views differ when it comes to the issue that job and family, which one is more important that the other? Some argue that job is the most important thing, because if he has no job, then he can’t earn money to sustain the family. On the contrary, some contend that people should give the priority to their family, because family is the most valuable assets in one’s life.

 

In my opinion, the issue depends on what stage the person is in. If the person is young and start to work, then I agree with the statement that job is the most vital thing. This is because for a beginner, he must behave well to gain other (such as his boss and clients) people’s attention. In addition, only by completely focusing on his/she work, then he can have more chance to succeed in the society.

 

However, if the person is at middle age, I will claim that he should deem his/her family the most important thing. My reason is for a middle-aged adult, he may already develops his/her career or has a stable work to earn money. In other words, the person already has constructed his/her economic foundation. In this situation, he doesn’t need to put that much efforts like a young person. Therefore, he can spare more time to take good care of his/her family.

 

Moreover, I am convinced that it is our family, not our work, companies us livelong. Thus, we should keep some time for them to compensate our absence in their lives, and I think the most suitable time is when a person already posses a stable economic foundation.

沙发
发表于 2007-10-20 18:44:00 | 只看该作者

字数~~~

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-10-20 20:40:00 | 只看该作者

有两百七十几个字了


                
那要多少呢

没有结论段可以吗

地板
发表于 2007-10-20 21:05:00 | 只看该作者

至少要300吧

结论段 最好是写吧...还有这个MS应该发在TOEFL写作专板上面?

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发表于 2007-10-20 21:15:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用huangzihang在2007-10-20 21:05:00的发言:

至少要300吧

结论段 最好是写吧...还有这个MS应该发在TOEFL写作专板上面?

那上面人气不够旺

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