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Topic 184

Some people hold the opinion that studying with a group of students is superior to studying alone in many ways. Others, however, contradict studying in group. Personally, I would prefer studying with others because I think it has more advantages.

There are numerous reasons why studying with classmates is more efficient, and I would in here explain a few of the foremost ones. The main reason is that I am able to get the very awareness that which part I am confused with. It can be given a concrete example. When doing an experiment together with classmates, we are being confronted with the same questions to resolve, however, ending with various results which incorporate both excellent ones and bad ones. Then I can analyze the differences and clearly realize why I did a good job or why I am so unfortunate, so that I will definitely make a progress which I cannot acquire in the way I study alone.

Another reason why I advocate the attitude of studying with a group of students is that I might be indoctrinated with novel thinking styles of others while we are studying together. Take the case of a thing that when a comprehensive task comes to my co-workers and me, different minds may get distinct notions. Perhaps each of us, nevertheless, has accustomed to the personal way to acquaint with fresh things which might render all of us to succeed in the end. While we are working with one another, one can share his way of thinking with others, which may be a shortcut. If it is not, it doesn't matter in my eyes. In a word, odds that the best method turns up are much higher.

One cogent argument for studying with a group of students is that the spirit of teamwork would be realized personally very well. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that studying in group is preferable just because we are a member of society and teamwork spirit is absolutely one necessity in my future life.

Of course, choosing to study alone has advantages to some extent, such as one is able to try to cultivate one's own ways of thinking and to avoid the interference from others.

If all these factors are contemplated, nonetheless, the merits of studying with a group of students carry more weight than those of studying alone. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw a conclusion that it is much more appropriate to study with a group of students.

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