[讨论]请教一道750分的语法题

michelledm

Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, there is a disinclination on the part of many people to recognize the degree to which their analytical skills are weak.

A) Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, there is a disinclination on the part of many people to recognize the degree to which their analytical skills are weak.

B) Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, which they admit they lack, many people are disinclined to recognize that their analytical skills are weak.

C) Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, analytical skills bring out a disinclination in many people to recognize that they are weak to a degree.

D) Many people, willing to admit that they lack computer skills or other technical skills, are disinclined to recognize that their analytical skills are weak.

E) Many people have a disinclination to recognize the weakness of their analytical skills while willing to admit their lack of computer skills or other technical skills.

答案是D   我想知道E错在哪里?

wooder_whj

个人认为E 选项中 have a disinclination to 和have willing to不平行,如果改为:

Many people have a disinclination to recognize the weakness of their analytical skills while have a willingness to admit their lack of computer skills or other technical skills. 

会好些.

此外, 动词disinclined 比名词disinclination优先.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-9-23 10:47:19编辑过]

michelledm

我想有没有这样的原因:

E强调的是while后面的部分,而原句强调analytical skills部分. 原句重心应保持.

bernburg

E选项的结构不是很好。前面是have而while后面应该是are willing才是。同意二楼的看法。

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