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 Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

The blue earth is  boon of human from nature. With the rapidly rate of construction of city and growing process of industrialization . the activity of human contribute on that our earth tend to more favorable to people live. Although there increasing number of people believe that activity of people exert negative effect on the earth ,however It doesn’t shop the process of civilization of  human. My opinion is just opposite to this sort of view.

First of all, people always looks forward , that means people with Majority tend to a more comfortable place to live in and more convenience mall nearby their house. Therefore , the authorities of city must put effort on  of city’s layout. My hometown , a coastal city , most people here prefer to wander along the beach and then go to shopping or other activities in the night. Thus, government decided to both build lot of apartment for citizen to live and constructed a shopping mall nearby the large beach. People don’t drive their car to the beach in order to long distant . so , this activity didn’t be considered the destroy of the earth. And  actually opposite that it is the harmony between human and earth.

Moreover, human developed industrialization partly in order to decrease the pollution and waste of resource.  Because people with increasing number recognize that utilize the resources from nature endless will end up their survival . there is also an example on my hometown . the government constructed a nuclear station on the foot of mountain that could be save the consumption of huge amount coal of steam power station.   This nuclear power station will serve a large area in east of china. Thus,  a lot of steam power in this area will be closed up and it was the great contribution for the environment of the earth.

Finally, although the air pollution , toxic chemical waste ,.destroy of the forest being a severe issue in front of human. But the contribution of people’s activities are out weight than harmful.

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