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发表于 2007-8-22 19:16:00 | 只看该作者

[求助]作文求拍

写了一个8月11的,希望高手看一下

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Nowadays, the price of gasoline and electricity is increasing in a fast speed, thus resulting in a lot of events happening all over the world, like wars. It seems inevitable that resource problems are highly focused by people, especially those living in areas that do not have much resource. Some people tend to think that increasing the price is the only way to solve energy problems because raising price makes people less likely to waste the resource. However, from my perspective, there are a lot more ways to limit energy consuming for the following reasons.

First of all, making people aware of the environmental crisis that our earth now faces is of great importance. Many people believe that our earth is full of resources, which, in fact, is not true. They, especially the rich should be conscious that once the earth had no resource, they could not buy resource with the money. In addition, laws should play an important role in our daily life for it can prohibit people from doing wrong. So all people should know that our earth is in danger and we should remember it forever.

Secondly, renewable or alternative resource, which saves energy, should be encouraged. Here is a compelling example that gives support to my point of view above. In my home country, China, fuels which use alcohol are assessable in some places like Shenyang, Beijing, and Shanghai. This kind of fuel uses food to produce alcohol and reduces the amount of pollution. Also, with this fuel, much of the gasoline can be saved from being wasted by people, limiting the use of the unrenewable resource like electricity and fossil fuels.

Finally, we ourselves can do small deeds to save the energy in our daily life. All of us should be sure that when we go out of the office, all the lights must be turned off. When driving cars on the road, try to drive in a constant speed, neither too fast nor too slow, to save the gas and oil. By doing all these small things, we have saved our earth unconsciously but effectively. It is easy to see that all that we do can make a great contribution to our earth.

Admittedly, others still hold an opinion that increasing the price is the most direct way to limit energy consuming. On the contrary, I still insist that there are efficient ways to save the energy. By doing things that we can do, we can save the earth from the energy crisis. So, to my humble knowledge, we can do more to save the energy other than increasing the price.


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发表于 2007-8-22 19:23:00 | 只看该作者

你可以先参考该版置顶的帖子里边的修改集合

然后我在iBT区有一个写作的帖子,你也可以参考一下

然后发现自己的一些问题,进行修改过后再发上来

我进行具体的修改

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