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麻烦德克给拍一下啦~~马上就考了~感激不尽

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发表于 2007-8-20 14:26:00 | 只看该作者

麻烦德克给拍一下啦~~马上就考了~感激不尽

TOEFL iBT Writing 
Independent writing 
58  is profits the only purpose of company ? 

      Currently , especially when we step into the information age with the rapidly growth of the economy worldwidely , most of the companys adopt the faith of " maximum profits at lowest cost "  . It is adimittedly that there is not much agrument around this faith , but  presonally speaking , I assume that every single company should  abide by the law and regulations endorsed by the government , and also should not violate the general moral standard which is acknowledged by the public .
       Firstly , each company should not bribe the government officier in order to reach  any economical benefits  , such as getting  a majoy construction project , passing the license , and so on and so forth .  I have recently been quite thrilled by the transprancy which the Beijing 2008 Oymipic committe displayed during the process of choosing and deciding the construction plan and company in the Olympic-related sports studium. 
       secondly , not all the law could restrict harmful behaviors of the company , so  moral standard at this kind of condition should play a crucial role .  For  instances , some companys forces their employee to work some extra time only providing the same amount of money as the usual work hour . actually , there is certian law against this , but most of the employee do not speak it out fearing they might lose job .  It is mostly same as the pollution problem  , there is law explicitly againgst it , but still many company dump the wastes , give off the toxic gas , pour the polluted water  , and so on.
      As discussed above , the company should not only settle the profits as the only goal in their business pursuiting , they should take the government law , as well as the social moral standars  into deep consideration . 

time : 26 minutes


沙发
发表于 2007-8-20 14:46:00 | 只看该作者

你可以先参考该版置顶的帖子里边的修改集合

然后我在iBT区有一个写作的帖子,你也可以参考一下

然后发现自己的一些问题,进行修改过后再发上来

我进行具体的修改

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-8-20 17:59:00 | 只看该作者
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