[原创]无志人常立志

easydudu

露怯露怯了（224第二篇）

In this argument the author is recommending that the Apogee Company close its field offices and conduct all its operations from a single location. This recommendation is in response to the present lower profit compared with when the company had all its operations in one location. The author's line of reasoning is that centralization would improve profitability by cutting costs and helping the comapny maintain better supervision of all employees. This line of reasoning is problematic in at least two critical respects.

First, no evidence has been offered to support the assumption that the reason the company enjoyed high profitability was its single location. While location may be an important contributing factor to a business's success, it is not the only such factor. Many other reasons - effective business practice, efficient advertising, or considerate customer service - could also account for the company's success. Lacking a detailed analysis of the reasons the Apogee Company succeeded, to assert that closing field offices will bring the company with higher profit is not convincing.

Second, the author unfairely assumes that centralization equals to better supervision of all employees. This is not necessarily the case. It is possible that for some certain companies/businesses, centralization will worsen rather than improve the management of employees. If the Apogee Company is this case, then the lax management will surely affect the company's profitabilty negatively sooner or later.

In sum, the argument is not well reasoned. To strengthen the recommendation, the author need to dive into the reason that the company was more profitable before and demonstrate that centralization can surely led to lower cost and better supervision, which will bring the Apogee Company with higher profitability.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-10-28 1:00:12编辑过]

easydudu

今天的额度基本没有完成，因为带着孩子去亲戚家给过世6年的外婆做忌日去了，太烦太累，所以。。。

但是也完成了一些：

1. YMH GMAT单词串讲听了8节

2. 把白勇语法第四章 动词形式和第五章 分词和不定式中做错的题重做了一遍

steadier

LZJJ加油,我以你为榜样

我每天的执行力度不够，定的计划总是拖到晚上，熬夜第二天精神不好，要提高效率了，加油共勉。

easydudu

以下是引用steadier在2007-10-28 23:34:00的发言：

LZJJ加油,我以你为榜样

我每天的执行力度不够，定的计划总是拖到晚上，熬夜第二天精神不好，要提高效率了，加油共勉。

哭+惭愧啊，我也是执行力不够，白天拖到晚上，特别是遇到做题不顺的时候，很容易拖拖晃晃浪费时间。

共勉吧。。。

easydudu

今天上海降温，暖暖的被窝和软绵绵的儿子真的好吸引我哦，一个上午基本上就赖在被窝里了，不过真的是年纪大了的关系，晚上看书到3点很累。

今天YMH串讲听了，正在做白勇语法。决定这段时间还是要定位在主攻语法上，要弄得透弄得彻底，写作也好阅读也好，都只能是在闲暇或者需要透口气的时候看，不能当主课的。否则又要主次不分，顾此失彼了。

加油！加油！加油！苟住的时刻到了！

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-10-29 15:15:21编辑过]

easydudu

今天索性没有跟着进度走，你看又来了吧，每次都这样，所以计划才白定了呀，唉。

做题，白勇的修饰语部分，觉得很难，很多题目看也看不懂，做着做着就想，干脆复习一下前面做过的题得了，结果就转向以前做过的了，比较简单，基本全对。顺便把解释从头到尾看了个透，也算是个安慰吧。

小宝不乖，哭啊闹的，累死我了。

easydudu

今天一定要跟着计划走啊！一定要啊！

鉴于前几天计划都没有完成，今天需要修定一下原有计划，尽量能补差。

今天底限是要完成狒狒逻辑4个test。

在此基础上如果还有空的话，就要做完白勇语法1个章节，而且要看详细解释的那种。

附带着如果累的时候听一听老俞的单词串讲、写文章、或者看NY TIMES。

priority是逻辑（4 tests）->语法（1 capter）->其它

 惭愧，结果一个也没完成，原因是做狒狒逻辑test 3时遇到很大困难，觉得题目也读不懂是做题更没方向，错误率太高了。的确，狒狒逻辑比OG上的要复杂，要难很多。

于是，决心静下心来听狒狒的网络课堂的讲解，晚上听了一部分，感觉很有启发，听到1点多实在盯不住了。明天会继续。

再次鄙视自己不能坚持计划，和薄弱的制定计划能力，这和我工作能力完全不相称嘛，想来想去大概是对自己要求太高了，以为自己是supermum，唉。。。都怪臭小虎，一天到晚作啊作的占用我宝贵的大好时光。不过我考试为了啥呢？有更高的人生目标和轨迹。有了那些又为了啥呢？为了全家更幸福。这么想想，就不觉得小虎是个小累赘了，呵呵。

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-11-1 10:18:22编辑过]

lymin

pf lz,

自己很汗颜啊，向你学习！

祝你成功790+6

easydudu

今天要听完狒狒逻辑的网络课堂！！！！！！！

没有听完。。。可是我尽力了，已经是凌晨3点41分了，虽然进度慢，但是思路超清晰，我有信心，不急不急。一会儿边听老俞边睡觉，希望可以发挥偶滴潜意识啊。

总算对得起自己了，不会觉得好惭愧。

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-11-2 3:41:45编辑过]

easydudu

一天都在忙家务事，都是推不掉的。到现在还没看书呢。

晚上开始啦！我的夜生活开始啦！