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016 It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

I am living in a campus. Although there are several restaurants here, the seats in restaurant is not always available on the weekend. From my perspective, I support the idea that to built a restaurant in my neighborhood because it not only spark local economic of my area but also provide an open public place for people to get together.

 

First of all, it offers an ideal place for people to get together. My friends and I are always busy around study and work. But sometime we need to have a break to have a relaxation. The restaurant is such a nice place that we don’t have to worry about interfering others when we are chatting and laughing loudly. We may also meet new friends that have common interest with us when we have a lunch or dinner at a restaurant.

 

In addition, building a restaurant is an effective way to spark local economy. Building an restaurant is a large-scale construction and would definitely create many job opportunities in our area such as accountant, chef, concession, usher. These employees will be drawn from local population. In consider of the tight job market in my area, the restaurant will potentially support many families.

 

At the same time, building a restaurant will attract many businesses in other district to take investment in our area, such as movie theater, super market, as well as shopping center because many people would probably like to go shopping or watch a movie after have a delicious meal. The leisure activities would be a great chance to further develop the local economy. This in turn would in increase the profit of the restaurant.

 

Generally speaking, building a restaurant in my district would potentially contribute a lot to our local economy. At the mean time, people’s leisure activities would be much more diversity than ever before. 

kene8722

看过看过，好多词不认识...

watershed

我也刚写了这一篇

7月28考 第一次写

Restaurant plays an important role in our life, which can save our cooking time, serve rich banquet and afford a place where we can entertain friends. At present, a new restaurant has been announced to be built in our neighborhood, and the construction of a new one would have both positive and negative effects on our community. Overall, I believe the new factory would give us more advantages than disadvantages.

First of all, it is so convenient to find a restaurant near community that we really have no reason to deny that we can enjoy delicious food without either long walking or additional traffic expending is a boon. Most people in our community are usually so busy with their working that they can not find time cooking themselves. The new restaurant would be welcome not only because of the meal it serves but also due to the time it saves. Further more, should the new restaurant be built, it would be the perfect place we used to entertain our friends. After enjoying the delicate food, we can invite our friends to have a visit to our houses. The short distance between house and restaurant would not be spent too much time and a successful visit definitely can improve the friendship. Don't you think the reason quoted above is very persuasive?

Besides, a new restaurant near our community can support our local economy and supply more employment opportunities. The tax paid by the new restaurant can be used to improve our community environment and more hired people would move into our community and bring a population boom. The residents can benefit from all of these changes. Take the real estate price as an example. The price of house in our community would plateaued inevitably, either for the improvement of environment, or because of the increasing demand of houses by the new people. If you consider this problem synthetically, you will accept my opinion.

Admittedly, some people think that many problems would come with the new restaurant, for instance, the more crowded traffic, the less area of the park, the noise produced by the restaurant and so on. Accordingly, I concede that some negative effects of the restaurant would influence our life. Yet, to postpone a new restaurant until we completely eliminate the cons would be to postpone a new one forever; any person who believes otherwise is envisioning an ideal solution which has no negative effects--a vision which amounts to fantasy.

To sum up, if we plan the construction of the new restaurant carefully and try our best to reduce its negative effects, it would bring us much more convenience and boon. It is superficial that to deny the new restaurant relies on some cons which can be easily solved.

德克的猪

这个是我之前写的,很有参考价值

Topic:

It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

It is utterly a catastrophe for me to waste my precious leisure time to drive from my neighborhood to the movie theater for a blockbuster-virtually the drive time is, at most times, longer than a movie (Lord of the rings is an exception). Even more suffering, to those who have one or two “little emperor” to take care of, they will inevitably experience the affliction resulted from children’s successional noise and cry, of course. To such misfortune, another must be added-the highway to the movie theater is widely recognized as the vastest parking lot in our city. In the light of such a situation, setting up a movie theater, indubitably, is a salvation for us unfortunate people.

Saving time is a tangible merit of building a theater in our neighborhood, but not the only one. Simultaneously, it would undoubtedly bring our neighborhood with a considerable number of employment opportunities. It is good news for those who have underwent(undergone) the frustration triggered by the failure in job seeking and been worrying about their jobs in our neighborhood.

Without a theater in our neighborhood, actually, life is to some degree monotonous. We deem watching a movie as a special treat-we prepare for a long time to drive to the remote movie theater and to tolerate the tough drive time. In other tedious and friendless evenings, watching TV might be the unique form of entertainment. However, it will wholly change if a movie theater (were) to be built. Any new movies are at hands-fortunately only several minutes walk away. Via this method, the movie theater would certainly add color to our lives. In addition, those related shops, say, candy shop, soft drink shop, fast food restaurant also make life more convenient.

However, to me, as a matter of fact, the most alluring advantage of the movie theater is that it never fails to provide young people with a perfect place to date-quite(quiet) and dark, without the risk of being perceived by parents.

After four paragraphs tough writing, I believe unshakably, those reasons will suffice to support my perspective-building a movie theater in our theater is a perfect choice.

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以下是引用kene8722在2007-7-2 20:59:00的发言：

看过看过，好多词不认识...

多背背单词,这篇文章写得蛮简单的

darkage

我觉得写的不错!

lemon2378

不错

wzhiBT

学习了一下

yumihooo

I am living in a campus(I'm a student who lives on campus) . Although there are (already) several restaurants here, the seats in restaurant is(are) not always available on the weekend(on weekends). From my perspective, I support the idea that to built(building) a restaurant in my neighborhood (is good) because it (can) not only spark (our) local economic(economy) of my area but also provide an open public place for people to get together.

 

First of all, it offers an ideal place for people to get together. My friends and I are always busy around study and work(studying and working). But(,but) sometime we need to have a break to have a relaxation(we need to take a break in order to make ourselves feel relieved, because, you know, working ourselves into exhaustion isn't a very desirable thing.). The restaurant is such a nice place that we don’t have to worry about interfering others when we are chatting and laughing loudly.(A restaurant is exactly a perfect place where we can chat and laugh loudly without worrying about others' interrupting.) We may also meet new friends that have common interest(interests) with us when we have a lunch or dinner at a restaurant.(Moreover, we may also get new friends, who are interesting in the same things as we do, when we are hanging out at the restaurant. The easier for us to get there, the more friends will we be able to meet.)

In addition, building a restaurant is an effective way to spark(boast) local economy. Building an(a) restaurant is a large-scale construction and would definitely create(offer) many(more) job opportunities in our area such as accountant, chef, concession, (and) usher. These employees will be drawn from local population. In consider of(In the consideration of) the tight job market in my area, the restaurant will potentially support many families.

 

At the same time, building a restaurant will attract many businesses in other district(districts) to take(make an) investment in our area, such as movie theater, super market, as well as shopping center because many people would probably like to go shopping or watch a movie after have a delicious meal.(Let's see the issue more transparently, building a restaurant will absorb a multitude of investments in capital construction, which means movie theaters, supermarkets, as well as shopping malls will be built sooner or later, because it's human nature to go shopping or watch a movie after having a delicious meal.) The leisure activities would be a great chance to further develop the local economy. This in turn would in increase the profit of the restaurant.

 

Generally speaking, building a restaurant in my district would potentially contribute a lot to our local economy. At the mean time, people’s leisure activities would be much more diversity(diversified) than ever before. 

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LZ:

Too plain to be good

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