[原创] iBT@CD 第一写作小组(8 月), 开始啦....

alexwithibt

以下是引用Water_Water在2007-7-2 9:36:00的发言：

现在加入还来得及吗？

这几天先把这几篇补上，希望能跟上大家的步伐。。。

YAOMM呢？

有分组的.

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=19&ID=258874&page=5

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=19&ID=258874&page=5

你要参加这里,那就算你一个吧.

alexwithibt

以下是引用yaoshuming在2007-7-2 13:26:00的发言：

目前到底该写第几篇了？

到底组员都有几个？

不是同一作文题目吗？

我都被搞晕了……

一共有三篇了.见首页贴.

每个人进度不一样. 不必强求.  MM可以按顺序写.  你要时间紧也可以在里面挑着写.

要是你有自几写的不同的题目,想让别人看看改一改,也可以放上来.

有时间的话,也帮别人改改.大家都有提高.

加油.

 

lindenwxl

可以加吗现在？

alexwithibt

以下是引用lindenwxl在2007-7-2 21:00:00的发言：
可以加吗现在？

可以

magang

No one helps me?

qianrene

我们都加油哦~~~

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-7-4 18:02:42编辑过]

qianrene

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=19&ID=258838&replyID=2417396&skin=1

被淹没了，顶上来，今天写的呵呵

alexwithibt

以下是引用qianrene在2007-7-3 12:17:00的发言：

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=19&ID=258838&replyID=2417396&skin=1

被淹没了，顶上来，今天写的呵呵

save时出现了问题.

改过来了

rio

以下是引用qianrene在2007-7-1 14:48:00的发言：

7/01/2007, 写作第三篇:  028(185题库).

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.

As we all know, the mass media today is marching at an unprecedented speed,including the television, newspapers, magazines,etc.Most of the media reflect lots of the personal lives of famous people such as public figures or celebrities,given two reasons below:

Firstly,the emerge of the images of famous people is a consequences of the taste of the public, evey ordinary people has a(an) inclination to pursuit(pursue) other person's private life with a curiosity as a human being, especially,(Should be another sentence here) people want to know the daily life or even secret events happen to a celebrity just to satisfy their curiosities, or at least to entertain themsleves after a long day's work. For example, I myself has even been a zealot  for the film star, Audrey, Hepburn,She seems so gorgeous to me and so beautiful as she is, she acted in a variety of famous Hollywood movies, so that as a fan of her, I can't help collecting her news and the  information about her career, also I have seen all of her performances on the screen.As a matter of fact, you can see from my experience that people always have interest in the life of the celebrities, whatever fields he or she is in. Finally, the media will make their  programs out of this trend so as to satisfy the appetite of people to gain their profits.

Secondly, since the famous people have some good characteristics and personality to be a famous one, they definitely can be immited by the mortals. Currently, many celebrities are invited to some kinds of talk shows to present their  experience and their private life to public volunteerily, to my perspective(Should be another sentence!), it is a good sign,(Another sentence)people don't have to seek the information anywhere just to watch TV programs can help them to get acquitance(acquainted) about this famous guy, there are some positive aspects of this kind of program, they lead us to think and care about the good personality and good deeds of the celebrities, such as the charity and donation the celebrities contribute to the poor people, then we are moved deeply by them and some of us certainly make our decisions after the celebrities to take part in the charity activities.

To sum up, one might say that the media may pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people, I would say the truth is, the more the better, because where is needs, there is deeds(singular and pl. form).

402字求砖头~~

I would give 5, if some sentences are seperated or connected with logic connections

小流星

6/26/2007, 写作第一篇:  011(185题库).

For university study, a library is a significant resource for
                    students. What ever you study in which subject, you must make use of library for your lecture or academic project. However, educations not only focus on academic result but also all rounded development. University Students required good academic results and healthy bodies. In my opinion, universities should not give the same amount of money to their students.

 

First of foremost, Library provide a learning environment to student which can not supersede. For a changing society, many new knowledge produced everyday. Student may need a lot of time to search for this new knowledge. Library plays a role that cut students’ time of searching and provides a great amount of books. Some professor or lecturers may also make use of them. How can we give the money to library as same as give to sports activities.

 

Moreover, the cost of providing library service is much greater than that of sport activities. For university, library should keep latest resource for learning. To maintain this latest resource, library need to spend a lot of money continuously to buy books and academic magazines like economists. Unlike sport activates, a large amount of money can use for a long period of time. Besides that, there are many kinds of sport activities in universities. It is difficult for university to measure the amount of money they need to give.

 

To conclude, universities should give money according to the rate of usage and how important to students. In this way, resources can be effectively allocate and reach win-win situation to both parties.

希望大大可以指導一下...

For university study, a library is a significant resource for
            students. What ever you study in which subject, you must make use of library for your lecture or academic project. However, educations not only focus on academic result but also all rounded development. University Students required good academic results and healthy bodies. In my opinion, universities should not give the same amount of money to their students.

 

First of foremost, Library provide a learning environment to student which can not supersede. For a changing society, many new knowledge produced everyday. Student may need a lot of time to search for this new knowledge. Library plays a role that cut students’ time of searching and provides a great amount of books. Some professor or lecturers may also make use of them. How can we give the money to library as same as give to sports activities.

 

Moreover, the cost of providing library service is much greater than that of sport activities. For university, library should keep latest resource for learning. To maintain this latest resource, library need to spend a lot of money continuously to buy books and academic magazines like economists. Unlike sport activates, a large amount of money can use for a long period of time. Besides that, there are many kinds of sport activities in universities. It is difficult for university to measure the amount of money they need to give.

 

To conclude, universities should give money according to the rate of usage and how important to students. In this way, resources can be effectively allocate and reach win-win situation to both parties.

希望大大可以指導一下...