OG10语法268题及GWD22语法总结日记，监督自己并欢迎大家多给意见

elinaqu

GWD-8-Q2:

Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.

 

1. Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted

2. Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both

3. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted

4. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted

5. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both

 

平行第一
            ，
                both 就要考虑到and,这里没有合适和and 并列的成分，所以both不对，排除A,B,E

比较C,D.当然是D好

elinaqu

GWD-8-Q15:

Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

 

1. Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.   被动要有by

2. Clouds form by the Sun’s warmth evaporating the water in the oceans, which rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust. 从句which修饰错误

3. Warmed by the Sun, ocean water evaporates, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form clouds.

4. The water in the oceans evaporates, warmed by the Sun, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust, which forms clouds.
                       从句which修饰错误

5. Ocean water, warmed by the Sun, evaporates and rises high into the atmosphere, which then condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form as clouds.
                       从句which修饰错误

 

1. 逻辑意思的顺序,动作的顺序
                 OG 261

elinaqu

GWD-8-Q34: GWD-13-28

Fossils of the arm of a sloth found in Puerto Rico in 1991, and dated at 34 million years old, made it the earliest known mammal of the Greater Antilles islands.

 

1. sloth found in Puerto Rico in 1991, and dated at 34 million years old, made it the earliest known mammal of

2. sloth, that they found in Puerto Rico in 1991, has been dated at 34 million years old, thus making it the earliest mammal known on

3. sloth that was found in Puerto Rico in 1991, was dated at 34 million years old, making this the earliest known mammal of

4. sloth, found in Puerto Rico in 1991, have been dated at 34 million years old, making the sloth the earliest known mammal on

5. sloth which, found in Puerto Rico in 1991, was dated at 34 million years old, made the sloth the earliest known mammal of

 

注意在C中that从句修饰a sloth不符合逻辑意思，D用名词替代了代词更好

elinaqu

GWD-9-Q3:

Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people now using their mobile phones to make calls across a wide region at night and on weekends, when numerous wireless companies provide unlimited airtime for a relatively small monthly fee.

 

1. Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people

2. As the cost of wireless service plummeted in the last year and as mobile phones became increasingly common, many people

3. In the last year, with the cost of wireless service plummeting, and mobile phones have become increasingly common, there are many people

4. With the cost of wireless service plummeting in the last year and mobile phones becoming increasingly common, many people are

5. While the cost of wireless service has plummeted in the last year and mobile phones are increasingly common, many people are

 

不选D因为with短语在句首，其逻辑主语应该是主句的主语，与这里的主句主语many people逻辑搭配不对。

介词+简单名词,不要接从句,不要接名词+句子,不要接名词+doing 介词短语做状语

elinaqu

以下是引用elinaqu在2007-8-28 22:20:00的发言：

如果大家愿意参考我的总结，那我把我的总结的时间表大概贴一下

下一阶段计划
      27 Aug – 7Sep 阅读 + 语法
                    

 

 

1语法巩固
                        

1．   OG268 再做一遍。做的时候就反复用排除的方法一个个想清楚，如果还有错的，那就是弱点所在了，再针对总结，保证自己是真的都掌握了
   --- ( 28Aug -29 Aug )
    

2．   OG268题的语法点不要自己作分类总结，太花时间，用已经有的菜鸟语法分类，只列举语法点的分类等级
    ---( 30 Aug )

3．   做GWD语法并总结错题
  （看GWD的讨论帖子，看看别人是怎么做的，思路是什么）( 27Aug-17Sep每天一套)

4．   320题Prep 语法做题并总结错题（PrepSC 在语法区有斑斑做出来的详细解释版，自己做一遍之后对照解释看）Prep语法很重要
    （11ep – 24 Sep）
  
                

5．   总结GWD和Prep错误多的题型回到OG看菜鸟分类后的单项语法点题目
    （22-23 Sep）
   
                    

6．   再做一遍OG268这一遍的主要目的是练速度（30秒排除）( 25 Sep )

7．   有时间考前就再看一下killer表格里highlight的题目
   ( 26 Sep )
    

所以我这两天在把OG268再做一遍找出自己的盲点，8月30号之后我会贴上我的OG268语法点排除等级分类总结，明天开始贴GWD22的语法错题总结，每天一套到9月17号，因为NN的意见，GWD太多争议题，不必要像OG那么详细地总结，之后会主要focus在Prep语法的总结，从9月11号开始Prep的总结。

 

顶一下自己的语法学习计划，并附上我的语法总结

elinaqu

GWD-9-Q27:
                （这题一定要注意,太狡猾了）

Scientists have identified an asteroid, 2000 BF19, that is about half a mile wide and, if it strikes Earth, it can do tremendous damage to part of the planet but probably not cause planetwide destruction.

1. and, if it strikes Earth, it can do tremendous damage to part of the planet but

2. and, if it would strike Earth, part of the planet could experience a tremendous amount of damage but it would

3. and that, if it were to strike Earth, could do tremendous damage to part of the planet but would

4. and that, if Earth is struck by it, can do part of the planet tremendous damage, but it would

5. and that, if it strikes Earth, it could experience a tremendous amount of damage but

 

 

Scientists have identified an asteroid, 2000 BF19, that is about half a mile wide and that, if it were to strike Earth, could do tremendous damage to part of the planet but would probably not cause planetwide destruction

E的错误关键在于虽然其用了一个形似平行的that结构，但两个that在各自的从句中所作成分不同，以至这个看似的平行其实是不平行结构，前一个that引导定从，在从句中作主语，后一个that在其引导的句子中不知道作什么成分，因为从句的主语it已经十分清楚了；所以，E这个答案最大的trick就在于平行结构的引导词的作用，这个问题希望能够得以重视，因为现在的考试中经常会遇到类似的问题。

黑猪

精做题 勤总结

你为大家做的这些让我感动...我的好多语法模糊点被你的语法总结干掉了.

万分感谢

elinaqu

GWD-10-Q1.
                    

According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.

 

1. minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice

2. minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing

3. minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing

4. it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice

5. it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice

 

be likely to do.  对

be likely in doing  错

plan on doing/sth 也对

讨论里没有讨论B, 为什么不对？

elinaqu

以下是引用黑猪在2007-9-13 22:36:00的发言：

精做题 勤总结

你为大家做的这些让我感动...我的好多语法模糊点被你的语法总结干掉了.

万分感谢

为了自己能够提高

不用客气，祝你考个好成绩

elinaqu

GWD-10-Q36:GWD-11-19

In Hungary, as in much of Eastern Europe, an overwhelming proportion of women work, many of which are in middle management and light industry.

 

A.     as in much of Eastern Europe, an overwhelming proportion of women work, many of which are in (which不能用来指人)

2. as with much of Eastern Europe, an overwhelming proportion of women works, many in

3. as in much of Eastern Europe, an overwhelming proportion of women work, many of them in

4. like much of Eastern Europe, an overwhelming proportion of women works, and many are

5. like much of Eastern Europe, an overwhelming proportion of women work, many are in

这题as和like的区别

as引导的是方式状语从句，AS IN后省略了主谓，在H，就象在欧洲许多城市一样（大多数妇女工作。。。。），很多妇女工作。。。。

AS做连词，但平行部分省略了（在比较结构中平行部分可省）

ETS对 like的理
            解
            远
            比
            字
            典
            里对 like 的
            解
            释
            要
            狭
            窄
            。
            这
            里 like会
            被
            误
            解
            为
            类
            似
            ，
            而
            不
            是
            比
            较 ,所
            以 as比 like要
            好，表示比较用as

 

用于前后的对比；much of修饰不可数名词，许多，大量的。

这个句子的结构是

把C还原后

（an overwhelming proportion of women work, many of them in middle management and light industry ）In Hungary， as (an overwhelming proportion of women work, many of them in middle management and light industry) in much of Eastern Europe.