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 1Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer?

 

 

Issue at hand is whether getting up early and start day’s work or getting up late and working until late at night is better. This issue is difficult because different people will hold different views. I believe getting up early is the better option because I work efferent in the morning, used to do exercises in the morning, and enjoy the teleplay at night.

 

One reason I believe getting up early in the morning is that I always full of energy in the morning, which allowed me work faster in the morning than at night. For instance, in the morning, I, a high school student, can write 2 compositions which over five hundreds words. On the other hand, at night, I work so slow that even cannot finish one article over five hundreds words. Therefore, in order to work and study more efferent, I will choose getting up early.

 

Another reason I think getting up early in the morning is that I get used to build up my body in the early morning. I usually go to park for exercises in the morning because of the fresh air and less people in the park. In the near park, there are less people in the morning, as a result you can use equipment for exercise, however, if you go to the park later, you will probably find that there is no free equipment for you to use because of the crowed exerciser.

 

In addition to the efferent work and exercising, a final reason I don not want work until late at night is that I like to watch TV in the evening. After a hard working or studying, no doubt, I will feel so tired and enjoy my leisure time. Also there are some teleplays in the evening which strongly attract me such as prison break, lost and 24 hours.