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[AWA模板] 1/10号,我也作文6分!!!!(GRE/T均4分)模版分享

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楼主
发表于 2007-1-13 23:38:00 | 只看该作者

1/10号,我也作文6分!!!!(GRE/T均4分)模版分享

刚刚收到的,我竟然也有6分!!!!!!!!!!

我的背景 03年T 4分,06年 GRE 4分, 06年新T 25分

作文一直是我的弱项,我也很自卑,GRE复习30天作文,全脱产,还是4分,不仅对自己产生怀疑!这次终于可以了!

考试的时候,Argument写作还剩1分钟,我在改一个单词的时候,大家都死机了,15分钟后开机,我忘了改什么了,结果过去了,是个影响,不过接下来还好,CD帮了我太多,下面介绍经验,给那些很努力的,努力提高而又觉得没信心,或者觉得无法下手的朋友看看。

1.复习材料: 新黄金80+本月/上月JJ

我考的2题都是上月的JJ,也同时是黄金80里的,所以其实只看上月JJ就可以了。

2.感觉:我也觉得无从下手,特别慌,但我不想放弃,就逼着自己看题目,最后我练了2篇issue,3篇argu。所以如果不知道怎么下手,就看黄金题目是怎么写的,然后看看argument

3.issue备考。需要模版,我是说开头结尾的模版,因为我就是用了一位NN的模版,献给大家。这位NN的模版很独特,就是连词特多!!

Should...? The author asserts that, however, some people would hold the opposite opinion because of their diverse background, ethics and personal concerns. From my perspective, nevertheless, after pondering on this knotty concerns, viewing this controversial issue in several diverse lights and taking some compelling factors into account, I concur/don't concur with the speaker and am inclined to hold the position that... the followings would greatly substantiate my points of view.

The most importatnt evidence for my view is that... in addition...specifically...it follows, therefore, that...

Another equivalently crucial ground is that...moreover...for instance...consequently, under this circumstances, it is obvious that...

Admittlely...自由发挥,说点不足...after considering both the advan. and disadvan. it is obvious that...

In sum, basing my conclusion on the illustrations and expositions mentioned above, accordingly, I hold the position that...

4.Argu备考,平时看看黄金就够了,反驳论点看7宗罪,同时也要再结合一位NN的,一般来说,最常见的就是:gratuitous assumption,数据问题,同时发生和  A不是B的唯一原因。

我的模版:

In this conclusion, the argument endorsed by the author is that... Adducing grounds to buttress his prepostion, the author maintains that... moreover...it is argued that...the author cites the fact that.....this argument is problematic in several respects.

First, and foremost...

Second...

Finally...

In conclusion, this argument is not compelling and not undeniable as it stands. Only with more solid confirmations, along with more concrete evidence,can the argument be viewed as rational and verifiable. To strengthen this argu, the author would have to provide evidence to show that.... in addition, the author would also have to present verifiable justifications to demonstrate that... Only in this way can the argument be more thorough and convincing.

我想说大家一定要有信心,GMAT作文还是很模式化的! 考试前我看了一位朋友的心得,他说Issue不用模版,结果他也5.5分,我就听他的,中间自己一顿狂写,题目是没有创新,就不能取得胜利和长期的成功地那个,我就狂举例子,把超女,联想并IBM全举上了;Admittely的部分就是说光创新也要有生产和销售保证,结果竟然是6分,大家也别太模式化哈,多来点有意思的,

argu就是背模版,套模版,我最后两篇作文都在420字以上。

大家加油!!!!

当初我GRE准备一个月作文,结果才4分,这就是努力的结果,我GMAT准备了10天多,背模版。

沙发
发表于 2007-1-14 00:38:00 | 只看该作者

兄弟文中提到的不是我吧...

那真可以作为经验向大家交流了

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-1-14 00:40:00 | 只看该作者
就是RIO
地板
发表于 2007-1-14 01:05:00 | 只看该作者

那还真可以作为一项发现了

我去把我那个帖子改一下,把你的6分加进去

5#
发表于 2007-1-14 01:05:00 | 只看该作者

你生日是0421?

6#
发表于 2007-5-29 11:04:00 | 只看该作者
真的十分感谢,我正在为AWA发愁呢!!!
7#
发表于 2011-12-18 22:03:36 | 只看该作者
非常非常感谢楼主分享宝贵经验,写作是我最头疼的事啦,纠结的不行,现在终于看到了希望
8#
发表于 2011-12-22 18:50:30 | 只看该作者
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