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rorarora

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mymengming

我做的新版的是

    

A
consortium of historically Black colleges in the United States
            capitalizing on
such schools traditionally rich relationships with
            African nations,
            integrates African
concerns into an international business study.

    

 

    

A.         
capitalizing on such school’ traditionally rich
relationships with African nations

    

B.         
while capitalizing on the traditionally rich relationships
of such schools and African nations

    

C.         
through capitalizing on such schools’ and African nations’
traditionally rich relationships

    

D.         
which capitalize on the traditionally rich relationships of
such schools and African nations

    

E.         
in capitalizing on such schools’ and African nations’
traditionally rich relationship

也不对，那个逗号把主谓分开，啥跟啥啊，要改也要把逗号去掉或者在capitalizing前面也加上逗号

mymengming

    

A
consortium of historically Black colleges in the United States, capitalizing on
such schools traditionally rich relationships with
            African nations, integrates African
concerns into an international business study.

    

 

    

A.         
capitalizing on such school’ traditionally rich
relationships with African nations

    

B.         
while capitalizing on the traditionally rich relationships
of such schools and African nations

    

C.         
through capitalizing on such schools’ and African nations’
traditionally rich relationships

    

D.         
which capitalize on the traditionally rich relationships of
such schools and African nations

    

E.         
in capitalizing on such schools’ and African nations’
traditionally rich relationship

或者

A
consortium of historically Black colleges in the United States
            capitalizing on
such schools traditionally rich relationships with
            African nations integrates African
concerns into an international business study.

    

 

    

A.         
capitalizing on such school’ traditionally rich
relationships with African nations

    

B.         
while capitalizing on the traditionally rich relationships
of such schools and African nations

    

C.         
through capitalizing on such schools’ and African nations’
traditionally rich relationships

    

D.         
which capitalize on the traditionally rich relationships of
such schools and African nations

    

E.         
in capitalizing on such schools’ and African nations’
traditionally rich relationship

    

这样我就支持选A了

夜凉如水

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ruru8ruru8

请问一下Ａ中的
        school’s 没有问题吗？

Ｃ哪里错呢？

yzysoly528

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notidgen

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