我AI摸版里的一句话：the claim of the arguer is overly simplistic,and he unnecessarily extends his broad assertion to an irreversible extreme，这句话可不可以改成the statement is overly simplistic,and it unnecessarily extends its broad assertion to an irreversible extreme? 我个人觉得前半句可以改，后半句就不行了，大家认为呢？
给楼主一个建议，呵呵。In spite of his insightful analysis, the writer needlessly stiffens his argument into a rigid scope without taking into account the facts from various angles. Although the line of reasonings he offered has expressed the idea he wants to illustrate, the means he adopted makes his argument to be limited into an inflexible one, thus deserved a critical evaluation. 哈哈，改了改表述，基本还是没变，一通看着眼晕的空话
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发表于 2006-11-17 11:26:00
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